Reviews for Indecent Proposal
james3142 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
You're each other's fate! GAH! lol I hate when stuck up happens to good people like Edward or when people change for someone. Not saying all change is bad but when you change so much for someone are you still you?

-james
jenmerc chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I absolutely adroe each one of them! I think all of us want a little more of this Bella in us, to be so carefree and fun. I do have a feeling its going to come back and bite her in the ass, but for now its endearing as hell.
Jdonovan09 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Love it
Bascetcase chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Oh God i love your story!those two are awesome!can't wait for more!
Midnight Cougar chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
""Yes sir, Mr. Grey," I smirked. Jake howled in the back seat." - LOVED that line, OMG I was howling right along with Jake. The comic element in this story really puts an interesting spin on the complexity of the actual situation.

Bella rocks, she is an great character, albeit a bit oblivious to her feelings & reality here. And Edward, I think I saw signs that he's realizing the grass wasn't always greener on the other side with Bree. I can actually see him getting protective of Bella if she were to threaten or insult Bella in some way. Also, I wonder if Jake isn't suspicious of B & E's relationship...

Love this story, read the update right away, thanks! xx :)
slp1 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
You should probably beat them with the same stick, it won't matter. They've both obviously been beaten with stupid sticks before.

Loved this chapter, no matter how infuriating they are. Can't wait for more.
CRob25 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Great chapter. I love that they're getting closer. can't wait to read more. :)
slc6548 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I think you'd have to remove the stick from Ed's ass before you could beat him with it - but yea they both need a good wake up call.

Excellent chapter.
shehazi chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Blind, blind,Blind, blind people!what the heck do they think those sparks are?

Thanks for sharing . Love them, even though they frustrate the shit outta me!
Glory2121 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
awww it so confusing but cute, and sad at all the same time!
Ur fan chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I want to kick their asses! If I was there I would slap Edward and tell him

1) he should stop calling her Isabella, everyone knows she preferes Bella.

2) He needs to learn that if Bree truly loved him she would've been happy for him to find happyness instead dissapointed that he apperently didn't need her anymore!
GorGirl chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I really hope we learn a little more about Isabella. She talks about Jamie, but we never see her talking on the phone to Jamie. Why Edward would want a perfect life with Bree when he could have a real life with Bella is a hard one. I think Hoverer knew right off the bat that Bella would a better partner for him than Bree ever was.
Dakota-louise chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
This is a beautiful but frustrating story i want to slap them both till they see what is front of them and tell Bree to jog on,I look forward to Bellas p.o.v. at the beginning of each chapter i actually hurt for her sometimes when i read them, Dak x
Gingerandgreen chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I say it every time, but I'm just going to keep on saying it: Best Bella in the Fandom. I love her to bits.

G&G

xxx
bdubs chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Love this Bella! I have a feeling this will end badly for them, but I love this story!
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