Reviews for Indecent Proposal
Ur fan chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I want to kick their asses! If I was there I would slap Edward and tell him

1) he should stop calling her Isabella, everyone knows she preferes Bella.

2) He needs to learn that if Bree truly loved him she would've been happy for him to find happyness instead dissapointed that he apperently didn't need her anymore!
GorGirl chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I really hope we learn a little more about Isabella. She talks about Jamie, but we never see her talking on the phone to Jamie. Why Edward would want a perfect life with Bree when he could have a real life with Bella is a hard one. I think Hoverer knew right off the bat that Bella would a better partner for him than Bree ever was.
Dakota-louise chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
This is a beautiful but frustrating story i want to slap them both till they see what is front of them and tell Bree to jog on,I look forward to Bellas p.o.v. at the beginning of each chapter i actually hurt for her sometimes when i read them, Dak x
Gingerandgreen chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I say it every time, but I'm just going to keep on saying it: Best Bella in the Fandom. I love her to bits.


bdubs chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Love this Bella! I have a feeling this will end badly for them, but I love this story!
michangelina chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Ok now I just want to smack Edward off the head! But I have to say I love this story! Excellent chapter!
twilightnaley19 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I think that Bella and Edward both know how they feel about one another, way deep, deep, deep down inside of them, but they are both too afraid and naive to notice it so they keep it hidden. Cant wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
HJL69 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I just love this story. As you say you just want to shake them and make them see what's in front of them. Cannot wait for them to realise
carebear309 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Right now I feel like B is the one more likely to get hurt. Maybe E is finally starting to realize that he is trying to get Bree back for all the wrong reasons. If he really wanted her, he wouldn't have felt so angry after their run in at the restaurant.

But yeah they are both being clueless right now.
ajg031cullenfan chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Loving this story! Is Edward gonna have a heart-to-heart with some of his fam so they can share what they all think of Bree? Would love to see a convo between Edward & Emmett.
michswan chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Now I'm not so sure about my Jamie theory...

Hmmm, methinks there's a lot of the green eyed monster going around. Surprisingly, I don't think Jake has any veiled intentions towards Bella - but I guess well have to see if that's really the case (thinking about her earlier letter reference to him...).

Loving this one!
NPakus chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
It always makes me anxious to read her letters. I just know there will be major heartache...but I also trust in your HEAs, so I am really enjoying this journey! Wonderful chapter!
GypsyS0ul chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Bellas a trip and it sounds like Edward was Bree lap dog who is she to dictate what he should eat she's like hitler as a girlfriend and what up with mike trying to act like nothing happend he sucks
GreenEyedLove06 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Can't wait for more
archy12 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
this Bella is so nutty and bubbly and bouncy!i love her!and if you want to beat one of them with a stick,it choose Edward.i think he knows more what he is getting into.

Mr Grey?you mean Christian Grey?lol!good one!

Bella's phone answers her questions,like an agony aunt?i had no idea this could happen.
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