Reviews for Indecent Proposal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Still one of the best epilogues in the fandom! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trouble makers :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not Bree! Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for babies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always I have to say that I fan of your Edward and Bella keep the good work please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to be in Italy now. :) |
![]() ![]() God I am really starting to hate this Edward okay he loves Bella and all that. But Edward goes off on mike. Even though mikes anger was justified. But he doesn’t say anything to bree only some bullshit lines when bree purposely bargained on Edward and Bella’s conversation which led to Bella’s accident and all the other shit she pulled like cheating on Edward. Wow just wow I really don’t like this Edward. And this Bella is AMAZING edward doesn’t deserve her |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much, but the one thing that drives me batty is when someone is screaming “let me explain!” like fifteen times while running after another who’s leaving. Why not just start the actual explaining? Even a simple denial of what Mike said (“we *weren’t* hooking up in my car!”) would’ve been more useful. I get that maybe the writer isn’t yet ready for the misunderstanding to be cleared up, but there’s gotta be a better way to draw out the angst. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That’s quite the letter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very happy movie like ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was maddeningly beautiful! LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Adventure music ensues* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t understand her logic of him trying to take Jamie away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We haven't heard much more from Mike in awhile. Guessing he'll be at the Benefit too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love their banter together! |