Reviews for Master and Slave
Concerned Guest chapter 1 . 8/30
Why do you have to ruin Christopher Paolini's awesome work and Eragon and Arya's characterization for the sake of writing a stupid sex slave story? :(
knightrider chapter 10 . 8/20
I honestly think this is very interesting and well written, and would love to see Eragon go on a revenge fueled rampage in his new form, which I think could make for a very cool storyline
The Winter Wizar chapter 3 . 8/1
arya a slave/prostitute lol still reading though
Guest chapter 10 . 5/21
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17
What is the name of broms dragon because it was saphira but if that is Eragons dragon then it cant
beastblau12 chapter 10 . 3/26
the death sucked, but this was a plot twist. somewhat reminds me of the fic his wyrda, but not as large of a plot point. and reversed
Arxenfex chapter 10 . 2/2
Ever since Arya died this became shit. I bet more than a fair few came here just for this interesting Arya x Eragon fic. Honestly I think your best choice is to redo a couple chapters. Or slightly change it. Maybe have Eragon save Arya from the verge of insanity on the medical wing bed.
Welp That's Sad chapter 9 . 12/20/2016
This is the most depressing thing ive ever read. I don't know if i should be happy it was a good fic or horribly crushed at Arya's death. She was bae so it kinda hurt my insides a little...a lot -

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Welp That's Sad chapter 9 . 12/20/2016
This is the most depressing thing I've ever my life. I don't know if i should happy it was well done or horribly depressed...Arya was bae so it kinda hurts a little - a lot...
1066wthec chapter 5 . 10/20/2016
1066wthec chapter 4 . 10/20/2016
love this fic. Please update!
Anagram11 chapter 10 . 9/5/2016
I hope Eragon gets his body back
Eragonascendant chapter 10 . 7/27/2016
Ok, I think I get it. But please, make arya come to life again.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/26/2016
You are useless as a writer and this is a waste of space on this site. Do us all a favor and keep your pointless drivel to yourself!
Anonymouse chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Fuck you, you killed arya
I'll never forgive you
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