Reviews for The Little Pink House
darcy13 chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Funny and suspenseful.

Great chapter!
MDtwiwriter chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
First, I'm glad you and your kids are feeling better. I am always excited to get an update on this story.

James is super creepy that he would approach Annie (I really hate that) just to taunt Alice. That speaks of a very disturbed mind. That lemon was so them and the ILYs. I love them together because they need each other. I totally fell in love with Edward when he picked up Annie and called her "...my daughter." A peeking tom...ewwwwww. That took away from a wonderful moment between them. I almost hope they never find out.
beegurl13 chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Oh man, James is a jerk! :D I loved Bella standing up to him. :D The kids were awesome! :D So funny! :D And finally some real smexin'! :D I love it, and I'm happy that they love each other. :) So sweet. :) I'm curious to see who's watching them. I'm guessing by the frown, it's maybe Jacob, but I suppose we'll see. :)

And oh please, oh please, oh PLEASE with the Jane and Emmett hook up ideas! :D I love it! :D And it would be so stinkin' funny if they did it and Jane actually LIKED it! :D And Rose was doing porn? Danggggg... :D No wonder Alec is so taken with her. :D Now maybe Alec will just "take" her and leave... :D

Great job, sweets! You did good! :)
Kerry Hale chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Love Jane. I kinda wanna keep her in my purse. Loved it
crazy-chick-4life chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
O no love it
I'mNotintheMoodAnymoreSorry chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
James is a first class dipshit. Gah!
Kgunter34 chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Eeww, it was probably the dog. Great update.
SunflowerFran chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Don't think that was Scrabble they were playing at the end...no, not at all!
KristineM chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Alec and James creepy dudes. I wonder if it was Alec looking in the window or James? Once again they're so creepy.

I'm happy that Edward and Bella are moving forward in their relationship! Great chapter! Thanks so much!
apk1980 chapter 16 . 8/16/2012
Oh jeez.. I can't wait to read more!
mrsricci chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
I love these children!
apk1980 chapter 6 . 8/15/2012
Oh God, I always hate Tanya.
apk1980 chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
Oh my.
I love this so far. I'm excited that this is an Edward/Bella listing, but I'm such an Emmett fan, in general, that I hope he doesn't get hurt or turn into an asshole. I can't wait to see how this goes.
Tiakie chapter 16 . 8/14/2012
Just fabulous - couldn't stop laughing!
ebayaddict chapter 16 . 8/13/2012
OMG! Where do you come up with this stuff! It cracks me up. And mixed in with such heavy subject matter. Awesome story! Please update soon! Poor Alice needs help quick.
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