|Reviews for Of or Pertaining to the Heart|
| needsmoreicing chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I love your portrayal of Pepper and Tony in this fic. I love the brief resentment of the fact that Pepper might feel sorry for him because, to me at least, he doesn't want her to see him any differently than before.
There are so many different emotions that are carried so well throughout this entire story and are so realistically portrayed. Fantastic job.
| Lover chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Completely brillant! While I wish that it was a bit longer, I think you did an amazing job of capturing the emotions of the characters of this scene. I think it sort of goes with the canon, it's just advanced for it's time. I suggest that you make this a two shot or write another one shot about how he tells her he's dying in the second movie earlier than he did.
| OnFireGeek chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
D'awww. What a sweet moment.
| jellyfishfarts chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
WOW, your writing is WONDERFUL! It's just so beaaauuuttiiffuull and shiny and polished! and the last line (although im embarressed to admit) made me squeel. very loudly. Good job though, I really like this one :D
| JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This was so perfect. I loved where this scene went. You had Pepper and Tony perfectly. And I love how she reacted to the reactor.
| si chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
this was really sweet and touching - great way of filling a missing scene
| Dolphindreamer chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Cute little piece always wondered how Pepper would react to the fact Tony came back wounded so badly
| angellwings chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Awww, I love this. It's so sweet and yet like Tony it's not TOO sweet, lol. I love Pepper's reactions to Tony through out this whole scene. Perfect. 3