Reviews for Pieces of Me
SunflowerFran chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
I love this story, and I hope that it will update sooner with the next chapter.
Bella has so much anger towards her mother...she has to try to get past it if she has any chance at a happy life. I think her old friends can help her, if she will let them back in.
Love it...need more.
Scattycow chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Thanks for the update.
I still don't understand what he has to forgive her for? He knew how much she hated her Mother yet still chose a job over being with her and his child? Seems to me Bella is the one who should be forgiving him!
laed03 chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Wow! That was really heartbreaking. Great update! You can't fault Bella for wanting to protect their child. How come Edward didn't look for her if he knew she was pregnant? Did he assume it wasn't his? Of course those are rhetorical questions... I will wait patiently for the story to unfold. Thank you for sharing and keeping me hooked! :)
SuexCoxCullen chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
I had to reread the first three chapters before reading this. That said, Edward has been a dic k for 2 reasons: 1st he broke a huge promise to Bella, if he truly loved her he wouldn‘t had accepted that job. 2nd he thought she had his child and didn't do anything about it? Is some people mad at what Bella did? I really hope no.
Now talking of good things: I love this story
MaryKitty chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
These two have a long way to go before they can come to terms with what happened in the past. Great update and I can't wait for more. This story is amazing
mountainlion718 chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Oh my...so much miscommunication ...
mountainlion718 chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
Oh damn , the girl just got home and everyone wants to jump down her throat...
red.cupcake.writer chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Wow. She was pregnant? Did not see that coming. And I totally get where she's coming from. I hope it works out. Great chapter. Update soon :)
mountainlion718 chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Poor Bella...the poor girl is gonna have a breakdown
mountainlion718 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I agree with Bella, there's no way in good conscience that you could let innocent children go with an unfit parent, you do what you have to do...
HockeyChick10 chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Wow.
HaiPeople chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
I am hooked on this story! Please update soon!
evilnat chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Great chapter. I am so glad there was more to her story than everyone thought, its usually the case, not everyone knows everything going on in someone's life.

I feel more bad for Bella than I do for Edward, she seems almost scarred by her childhood.

xx
jansails chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
So much pain, distrust & miscommunication!
jansails/jan2
SusanQ chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Such a good chapter. :)
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