Reviews for The First Time
Late2BN chapter 3 . 7/8
Is there anything I could say to convince you to write more about Fi and Michael? As others have said you write so convincingly about why they stay together. Thank you for your BN stories. I loved them.
Lakitalover chapter 3 . 9/23/2015
I've read a lot of fanfics about this scene, but I really like your interpretation of it.
Lakitalover chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
You know, I think this is the best non-cannon explanation of why Fi felt so compelled to stay with Michael that I've come across.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/22/2014
So even with all the literary license and embellished details you added that were off the original story ... I LOVED THIS STORY! Excellant writing and ability to communicate these two characters sentiments. Beautifully done : )
JulBram chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
Well done! Again, congratulations!
doc100 chapter 3 . 7/18/2012
This was in one word, "perfect!"
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
Can't wait for more!
moviechick9620 chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
oh i love this so much!
please write more!
Jedi Skysinger chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Loved your take on 6.03 from Fiona's POV. Lots of them out there, but this is one of the best. Good job!
Souriswingette chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Luckily there are Fanfictions to say those three words to Michael ! ;-)))
AllIhave chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
Enjoyable and well written:).
coolaquariun chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
Great work! Loved how Michael got over his own emotional allergy and asked Fi about her past, he really loves her! Her slap in response was so trademark Fi.

Hope you do more one shots in future:).
emilyjay chapter 2 . 6/10/2012
I loved this story! It was well-written and very evocative. I also felt like it realistically filled in those moments in the show where there was no dialogue - just a LOOK. Good work!
campbellk2 chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
Wow. This is so powerful - very emotive. Hope you write more.
i luv ewansmile chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Simpley, wow.
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