|Reviews for BBxRae: The Little Things|
| derektomlinson chapter 1 . 8/28
raven hissing saying telling yelling to garfield dammit beastboy what do i have to do to get you to say that you love me and Roy had better keep his mouth shut about Karen whenever victor is around
| WordSPark37 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
I don't know if it's the fact that this is about my favorite pairing, or if it's because of the amazing, intricate detail you put into it, the wording, phrasing, dialogue, pacing, or just the plain, simple fact that it rules as a one-shot...
But this is some of the best BBxRae writing I have ever read. It's absolutely Legen... (wait for it)
I normally don't have high hopes for one-shots. They're usually cop-outs of what could be great ideas because writers tend to squeeze in tons of ideas into one short little story where they have an excuse to simply give a backstory in a short paragraph and not develop the characters.
Granted, you pretty much did give the whole backstory in a few paragraphs. But it was the way it just sort of seemingly meshed into the story, that made it work, and not only that, it was perfectly executed. The development of the two characters, the indirect interactions between them, the thought process... Man, I just wish I was half as good as you! It was perfectly executed, and what's truly impressive is that you managed to do so much in little more than 2,000 words! And although I was left hungering for more, I did not feel as though it was missing anything really. I would have loved to read about something leading up to this, and of course I'd love to read 90,000 words AFTER this moment, but I suppose I'll take what I can get!
I don't know what else to praise, really. I can only say that this has unfortunately not garnered the attention it deserves, and I will definitely recommend this story to everyone I know! It's short, sweet, to the point, and pretty much just brightened my day! What else can I say?
...dary! Legendary! ;)
| bluewizard313 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
lolz nice... love the little joke on the end :)
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
VERY nice, I gotta ask though, are you basing this story on the show or on the comics?
| Katwizzle chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Loved it great ending :)
| ThatCheshireSmile chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I loved this! It was really cute. Great job with Raven's inner monologue. I felt like I was actually experiencing her thoughts!
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
To put it simply: I thought it kicked ass. It was really good. You have a gift with words that brings forth clear and beautiful imagery. Excellent analysis of the characters and their situation as well. Everyone was in character and you did well in conveying the thoughts and feelings of those involved. You write...sensuality very well. And...if I may say so, the part with Karen and Roy made me laugh. Good luck and keep rockin
| onominous chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Aw, that was nice. i like how every one was in character,and no hints of oocness. i worry about Roy, one day, all the girls he's ever talked about is going to gang up on him and beat him senceless. great job! onominous