Reviews for Hard Work Pays Off Sometimes
Nirvana48 chapter 17 . 6/30/2014
No offense or anything but, you are a really sick man/woman who gets off on very dark stuff. That now and forever I will put your name as one of the people who write fanfic that I shall never read again!
Jonathan6850 chapter 17 . 5/29/2014
Excellent chapter.
Biplis chapter 17 . 9/23/2012
Hot damn it is good. I must say that it turned quite dark, really interesting, but this chapter turned kinda...dry. There was something missing, but definetly good.
Gaiseric chapter 13 . 9/11/2012
This is just an awful story. In the beginning I thought it showed some promise, but you've created something where bloodshed is portrayed for no other reason than it's sensationalist. I mean the bit with Kurenai, if he truly valued her as a friend he would have reacted drastically the moment the knife made its first incision into her flesh.

You've also put Konoha in a stupidly unreasonable position, which it is ludicrously outnumbered, again this smacks of the need to make the story pointlessly darker. And then you have incessant betrayal from people who would never do it, AU or otherwise. I mean the Aburame? Give me a break! Logic driven they may be, but in all reference to them they would never betray the Leaf. And an alliance with Kumo and the invaders? How dumb can you get? Kumo doesn't need any more recruits and would more than likely kill the Aburame than accept them, as I'm sure their logic would dictate. And even if they did try and kill the Inuzuka, they'd be slaughtered the minute it was over. You honestly expect any reader to believe that even once it had been done, the Aburame would 'logically' believe they could do something like that and get away with it in a village with massively heightened war-time security? What a crock!

I usually take stories with a pinch of salt. I also usually laugh at people who take fics WAY too seriously. But I think in this case the fic goes way beyond suspension of disbelief and straight into 'what the hell' and 'how dumb do you really think we are'?

As I said, I try to keep an open mind with these things, but this is just needlessly and shamelessly gore-driven drivel with no appeal to logic and no semblance of thought outside of how to sensationalise it and make it as pointlessly dark as possible. I mean why don't you just top it off with something crassly over the top like having Hinata raped by one of the kitsune before being slowly torn apart by it when it's done. Think that's far-fetched? Because the way this story is going I don't see it as being all that improbable.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
trash this fic. i have no idea where it's going. you jump all over the place and its hard to follow. you know what, dont bother writing, you suck. this fic has no cohesion.
Cuervo Blanco chapter 17 . 9/5/2012
A beautifull night for a Bloody Mary...
JOHNXgambit chapter 17 . 9/4/2012
Naruhinalover chapter 17 . 9/4/2012
YES YOUR BACK i thought you left this story nice chapter update soon how will naruto get his body back to working normal cause haveing the chains to use as his lims like octopus in spider man not so cool after awhile and did you see my other reviews about ideas for the story? Again welcome back and update soon
devilzxknight86 chapter 17 . 9/4/2012
Clouds turning red from all the blood.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/20/2012
Yo just thought of somthing will naruto get the toad summons since jiraiya or will that make people think who is he if not toads what will he get if i can make a suggestions maybe wolfs?
plz update soon i liked your other story to just dont kill naruto to soon by those grils lol have luck save him but hinata finds him when everyone left

VLS chapter 16 . 7/11/2012
Such a unique story!
It's really dark, which I like.
Biplis chapter 16 . 7/8/2012
Great story and I can honestly say that I just didn't see this story being so grim. But I really like where this might be going, just expecting to see next chapter.
mfmxxx chapter 16 . 7/8/2012
2. Thick Roots Strangle The Tree: Naruto stumbles back to Konoha, heavily scarred and permanently injured. His hair has grown white from the torture he has endured, and he takes the new name of Hanzo Shimizu to hide his identity. He finds Danzo is the new Hokage... But where is Jiraiya?

Scarred while being a Jinchuuriki seems slightly unrealistic to be honest.

But the rest sounds good.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/8/2012
Nice chapter cant wait for you to update I have a few questions and ideas for you though. Is naruto going to be able to alter hinata seal when he gets better in the sealing art? Can hinata she her medical ninjust with the jyuuken attacks? All in all great story update soon.

Ookami88 chapter 16 . 7/8/2012
Damn, this is really getting intense... Can't really say much more here...
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