Reviews for Bold undertaking
janyaoi.143 chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
Oh oh oh.. So hot! Is there a sequel to this?
PlasticRoses79 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Soo hot! And I really enjoyed your descriptions of Neji and everything was just great! Really awesome one shot :D
Night-Being chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
Ooooh. *shivers* Another unusual pairing. Those two together it's so much beauty it hurts my mind to even picture it. *.* Ouch... but I'm still going to. Ouch... This was hot and steamy and hot and... uh... did I say hot? Yeah well, your fault that you're making my brain hurt! :P :D

And you sure are doing Neji an awesome service, describing him like this. But you do have an extraordinary talent for descriptions, I give you that. ;)
jj chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Bffjmnnk chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
That was so hot O_O This is no dubt my new OTP O_O
RinneLin chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
wierd pairing. but a very nice story. I like
Loojee chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
that was some hot ItaNej fanfic! LOL, i never thought that this pair is absolutely SEEEEXXXYY! yeah! haha! praises to the writer!
Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
LOl good ending it was really funny!
itanejiluver chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Lurved it! An awesome itaneji piece :)
Sarah chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Great, we really need more of this pairing
Rhaziell chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I loved it! Again! great story, hope you will make another story of this pairing... i loved it!
Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Pffft, so basically he's saying, "Let's fuck again next week"? XDD Great job though!
Tikvah chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Guh! Ita/neji is just one of those pairings I don't really like but at the same time just can't stay away from. Hotness overload!

I really liked how you wrote Itachi sort of worshipping Neji. I also loved how Itachi seems to be almost hypnotized throughout the fic, like he knows he want what's happening but really has no control of the situation or himself. To me it felt refreshing to see this side of him as a character since he often get to be a very controlling top in yaoi stories and it added something that made your story feel worth reading despite being very similar to at least a couple of thousand others on this side :)
echo2794 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
oooooo these two were cute, and different then usual a bit :) i liked it. the alley is very dirty though haha, atleast they used protection xD its a good lesson for many hahaha nice job!
soulette chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
yah im the first one, i just have to say one thing...amazing. amazing story, amazing details and ur just plain amazing. ive read all ur stories and let me tell u im in love with u and ur dirty mind lol. plz write lots more
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