Reviews for Unfortunate Liminality
CyanB chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
This was a follow find, and I am beyond glad I did.
Exceptionally well done and moving.
Pluto the ninth chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Interesting... Very Interesting.
bluekrishna chapter 5 . 10/12/2012
Oh, I like it! Had a bit of a cry during that last chapter, it was lovely.
Squeeze-the-Fish chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
Oh, Thane. Le sigh. You write him so beautifully, and I love the instances where he is able to show his skill set and in such a subtle, but impressive manner.
Squeeze-the-Fish chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Yes, so I’ve wandered here from your other story. I’m a Garrus fangirl at heart, so I couldn’t resist. You’re probably going to get bored at me gushing about your characterizations, but I just can’t help myself. The frustration that Garrus is feeling is palpable. Bonus points for adding the little bit about their first few times not just “falling into place” like some kind of intergalactic porn.
LadyVampyreMiya chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
Loved it! Very nice!
My only complaint would be the bit in the last chapter - I can see the effect you were going for but it did through me off a little...

Otherwise I enjoyed it greatly! :)
BlueBerryFW chapter 5 . 7/2/2012
this. Just this. Wonderful, well written and completely great. Of course I fell for you trap, but it was so good to find out it was one. Thank you for this awesome story.
Velasa chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
well hell, that was an emotional little thing. I certainly didn't guess where it was going o_O I'm glad it didn't end up like you meant initially because that would have sucked, this wasn't sunshine and rainbows but it was real and good and it settles well on my heart. Also, I tear up like a bitch every time the 'always got your six' line comes up. God I love these two.
A. K chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
I usually don't leave reviews because I'm lazy, but I just wanted to say that I really loved this story. I think you captured Garrus and Shep exceptionally well. You put into words exactly the things that I like about their relationship.

Though during the last chapter I nearly stopped reading because I was like "uhm, what is haaappening?", I'm glad I finished it. ;)

So, keep up the good work, I guess!
Dezaria chapter 5 . 6/16/2012
Shit. You had me going there for a moment. Part of me had wondered if you finished ME3 and took out your anger on this innocent story, haha! Once I read your ending A/N it all made sense though. Phew.

Despite, or maybe in spite of, the tear-jerking worst case scenario Garrus envisioned playing out, I really liked the ending. :)
Dezaria chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
Oh, well then. I was all happy that someone else loved Urz, and then Garrus and Shepard were having naughty time and then BAM! I mean, I had been worried that another vorcha would come out of no where, but I didn't think the varren would get to them.

I need to know what happens. Next chapter!
Dezaria chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
haha, the code I had to type in to login was "orny." I swear I'm not 12, but it just had me giggling.

Anyways, I really appreciate you responding to my reviews, and I'm thankful that you didn't take anything I wrote personally.

Poor Jack in this chapter. The third wheel AND the one without armor. At least they all understand, and somewhat accept, that all missions get screwed somehow. Is it a Shepard thing? I guess it can't be, since Garrus lost his group while Shepard was dead. Liara had trouble with the Shadow Broker while Shepard was dead as well, and that's just off the top of my head. I digress.

I loved Shepard blushing! She's such a great character, and it's obvious that you enjoyed morphing her into your version, because it comes out in the carefree way she's presented to the reader.

I played through as an infiltrator, and Garrus' comments on my head shots always made me grin like a goober. A few times I thanked him for the compliment, like some kind of knee-jerk verbal reaction.

Also, a dead krogan is totally cover.
Dezaria chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
So... Thane is one of my favorite characters. I romanced him and cried like a little baby when he passed.

I like your characterization of him. Very much, even.

I also enjoyed your take on Jack. Love, love, loved the interaction between everyone in this chapter.

It's a little past one in the morning, so I'll continue reading tomorrow night.

Thanks for the great read so far!
Dezaria chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I really like the start! Very sexy and playful. Plus, it's nice to have the male in the relationship over-thinking it for once. Shepard has a quad, dammit!

With that said, please take this as concrit - deep breath - okay? Stories generally are written in past tense, especially third person perspective sci-fi and/or fantasy stories. Due to the fact that your fic is in present tense, I had some trouble at first adapting.

I'm not trying to say that your story is lesser than because it doesn't fit the usual standards, not at all. I just wanted to let you know, and if you respond that writing the story in first person was part of your vision for this piece, then I got'cha. Otherwise, I hope you see my tip as helpful and not condescending, as I highly dislike condescension.
IzzGidget chapter 5 . 6/10/2012
You had me going for a minute there. Reading through that play out of what their lives would have been like, was like watching a train wreck, I couldn't stop even though it was killing me to keep going. I'm so glad you ended it the way you did! Now I won't be crying!

On a more technical note, I really like the flow of your story, especially with this last chapter. I like the little mannerisms you gave everyone, because it made them feel even more real than they already are. I tip my hypothetical hat to you.
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