Reviews for Charlie Bone and The Rivalry
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
that was so gaay
Jess chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
Im sorry but that was the most stupid story iv read in my life.
CoffeeQueenDemigod chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
Hello,

the story looks really, really good.

I love how you made Charlie just walk up to her and be like "Hello I'm Charlie Bone"

and go on like that. I thought it was kinda funny, I really like the idea of Charlie falling in love with a girl from the other side. It looks like Charlie and Belle are going to bring the to sides together! Keep writing this, I really like it :D

Coffee
MrsHoranTomlinsonPayneStylesx chapter 2 . 6/2/2012
Loving it! :P xD can't wait to see where this goes!
FloatingTopHat56 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
This is good! Try adding a little more detail perhaps?

Great though, continue!

7MD
MrsHoranTomlinsonPayneStylesx chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Very Well written! :D. If you had to improve you could add a little more detail but nothing apart from that. Loving this at the minute, please update!