|Reviews for A Study in Aqua|
| JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
This is interesting, though kind of abstract. Personally I find it a bit hard to believe that no one would have asked them what the Southern Water Tribe is like. They must have wanted to know why Katara and Aang had to travel all the way to the North Pole to be trained; that was the whole purpose of their journey.
There were only one or two mistakes. I think "elegant" should be "elegance".
I can see what you were going for, with repeating at the beginning and end; but I think the line "We lasted one whole day before we fell" is out of place at the end.
Overall, good job on this. Keep writing!
| VolcanicIce chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Beautiful. Haunting and slightly over dramatized but still absolutely beautiful. You write wonderfully.
| Zutarafan4ev chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
it's depressing but i like it