Reviews for No Squirming
candy4beth chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
i like this version better
Skarlettefox chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Awesome XD
blackbutlerfan98 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
D'awwwwwww! Another cute one!
Shiera137Faustus chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
i just love demon stories, as well as demon x their masters (or some other human) fanfics.

unfortunately i have only found two demon series, but i love them both. lets see...theres bartimaeus trilogy and black butler...

anyways, back to complimenting your fanfic and dying from jealousy...yeah, that pretty much sums up my feelings. your a good writer!
Tristia chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
It was a great attempt! I like how you portrayed Sebastian's character. There were about 7-8 major spelling mistakes and a lot of major grammar mistakes (way too many to count). Try using spell check and grammar check if your writing program has it and if it does not, have someone else proof read it for you. I think you have a good start to your writing and if you learn to watch your grammar and spelling, you'll definitely grow to be a great writer (:
shammymeatsix chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
I liked this story it was so cute :)
promocat chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
great little lemon!
spongebobXhinata chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I was completely intrigued the whole time! I love how you kept Sebastian in character. I'm begging you, please make more!