Reviews for The Bartowski's versus May Flowers
s-david-m chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
A touching post finale fic, and more believable than most others.
Fierce Queen chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Oh this was wonderful! So sweet. Your grammer could use a little work, but it didn't impede the story that much.

Wonderful job!

Blessings,

Fierce
Imagination-Parade chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Nice to have all the context to that line about Morgan liking to watch girls go at it :-p And who plans their Halloween costumes in May? WE DO! Not-So-Scary is pretty much going to be the best thing ever this year. So I loved that line just because umm...yeah. We do.

Seriously, this was super cute! I was beginning to think you were totally going to miss posting this in May, haha.
2old2write chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Wonderful. So much fun and joy despite the pain and worry still there. Love stories with Emma and Molly. Nerdy stuff with Morgan gave us the silliness in the midst of the angst which always set the show apart from so many others.

Very sad with Chuck watching the videos by himself. I understand why he did it but am always glad when either he gets over it and/or Sarah comes to him and wants to move on.

Ahhhhh ... Paris!

Thank you. Would love to read more.
UKWritr chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
That was brilliant. I loved how Sarah found Chuck waking up in the middle of the night and ended up going to Morgan for advice, and the ending was pretty damn' perfect :).
ljacob chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
OMG this was one of the most incredible stories i have ever read you captured the characters so perfectly and the story was so beautiful thank you so much or this and please continue... pretty please? haha i would love to continue reading it
LadyMinnyOfRaven chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Lovely Story. I really enjoy how you write dialogue. It feels natural to the characters.

I enjoyed all the nerdiness at the start and the cute parts with Molly. The wedding video scene nearly brought me out in tears.

Beautiful story Alicehermione!
Reyes9 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Really great work here Alice Hermione. Great job.
Wepdiggy chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Random factoid: There were 40 shootings in Chicago over the Memorial Day weekend. Perhaps Sarah Walker *was* here. Heh. That is all.
Ash2134 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
This was great, really well put together. I like that they didn't sleep apart for very long. The Sarah and her mom chat was great. The wedding video part was really emotional and Sarah was just amazing at the end!
Hotski chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Amazing work with this one that even made me a bit emotional and that's a great sign. Especially the whole part with Chuck sitting and watching their wedding video night after night and crying over it, and Sarah gets to see that.

Really love that you moved into a few months directly and that you mentioned that they didn't sleep in seperate beds for long. That's one of the thing that I feel worst about in post-finale storys. The really angsty ones I don't read though.

It was so sweet of Sarah waiting for Chuck for quite some time so they could snuggle some before sleep and that Chuck was Sarah's perosnal extra pillow and planket for his warmth.

I always really love the storys I've read that Chuck is super great with Molly aswell as other kids because that's just promising for their own kids, even if it's not in the fic I can't immagine Charah without a kid someday.

It was pretty emotional when Sarah finally went to him when he watched their wedding video. Now I'm not saying that I'm sitting here crying my eyes out but it was still a bit sad and a lot of happiness for Charah in the end. Sarah was handeling it perfectly with first the picture and she really talked great. I guess you should get the credits for all of that though. And now they're going for a vacay.

So all in all a really good job with a post-finale with a lot of fluff and some sad moments but not tenstion or angst between which is the worst thing after a death for one of them in FF in my mind. So I vote yes for a sequel or a follow-up, just keep the angst down, aye? ;)
esardi chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
That was very well written. You captured all the characters the way I feel they would have reacted.

That scene with Chuck sneaking away and watching his wedding was gut wrenching. I am sure that he would not say it but in his mind there probably was great fear. Chuck was thinking what if she never remembers. His greatest fear was that at some point Sarah would have said enough and left. Having that over your head and realizing it could happen at any moment must have been very hard for him.

Sarah asked Morgan why Chuck did not talk to her about this. From my perspective it was very easy. Chuck was very unsure how she would react. He had seen her mad before. The last thing Chuck wanted to do was push Sarah. He thought that if he did he would lose her forever.

What your Sarah character did was what Chuck needed to really reconnect his with his wife. From now on he will no longer be afraid to let her in. If you want to continue this story please go ahead, I will be reading it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
it is so beautiful. please continue.
00Awesome chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This was an awesome story. You should write some more.