|Reviews for Journey to the Frontier|
| silverwolf chapter 36 . 4/11/2013
add some mary and ragnar in war of emotions maybe have him join the team in loss
| Luminesyra chapter 35 . 4/6/2013
Okay, a random tidbit I noticed in chapter 3, is that Mary couldn't understand Ragnar without her power ring, but if he was wearing his, she should have still been able to understand him, because he had a translator on his ring. If you saw the episode Babble, Hal and Kilowog(which that is actually how you spell Kilowog) couldn't understand each other when their rings ran out of power, but they understood Razer until his charge died, too. I understand that you set it up like that so she would get her ring back, but that little plot hole bothered me just a tad.
It just occurred to me that you probably wrote this long before that episode aired and didn't know about that, thus leaving this whole comment null and void. I feel like an idiot.
Oh well, you know now, but don't change it, because I like the chapter how it is. (Although you probably wouldn't have changed it anyway because... you know what? I think I'll shut up now...)
| littlegem chapter 47 . 2/28/2013
This is a great story and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
| Jeff chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Mary Jordan? More like Mary Sue...
| Guest chapter 35 . 10/26/2012
Oh my gosh! This is my favorite chapter so far. I think it would've been funnier if Ragnar had tried to marry Mary and Hal had busted in at that moment, but the way you wrote it wa still pretty cool. Good job. You should write a Razaya story! With your OC Mary, of course.
| Smiles123 chapter 47 . 10/1/2012
Looking forward to the sequel! You did an awesome job and Mary was so hilarious! Thanks for mentioning me! :)
| Skystar chapter 41 . 9/30/2012
Okay, this is really random, but am I the only one afraid of what will happen when Razer meets Guy Gardener?
| Guest chapter 47 . 9/29/2012
Where did you post your vid and what's it's name?
| SilverWolf2010 chapter 47 . 9/29/2012
Oh no!Without KIKAKATTIOI,I'm gonna go reatarded without her fanfics!They were that good...
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 47 . 9/30/2012
aw, thankies for mentioning me! w i will look forward to seeing the sequel! :)
| Skystar chapter 46 . 9/24/2012
This was a wonderful story. I loved Mary, and I can't wait to see her again! I also liked your artwork, and the video should be cool. Well wishes.
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 46 . 9/26/2012
Amazingly epic! I loved it, it was so touching I felt li,e crying for a moment!
| SilverWolf2010 chapter 46 . 9/24/2012
Me:YES!(starts doing fist pumps)Your not finished!Thank you!Great picture by the way!I love it!Oh I have to save it to my library of photos!Thanks for being The Master of Fanfictions with OC's!
| SilverWolf2010 chapter 45 . 9/23/2012
Woah...You should continue the series with this same story,but just make an announcement for Season 2 with Mary,and continue as you watch the things said,I LOVE THIS STORY!Im gonna reread it every day!
| Shelia13 chapter 46 . 9/24/2012
Awww!I've been reading this for a long time...at first I just scrolled over it several times[apologies] but when I fianally came back I decided I miss judged it and it was totally worth reading...also im a little sad we didn't learn more about this 'friend' of our young latern here but I can't wait to read the sequel