Oh nooooooo! I've caught up. And this hasn't been updated since the 50th. Sheesh, that was three years ago? Time flies. But, but, but it was just getting to some really interesting parts! I mean, I can't say it was just getting to the good part because the whole thing is good, but the things you were just getting to were really interesting, and I'm hooked, and dang it this fic is so amazing and I want more! *Aggravated Sigh*
So anyway, I love this fic. It's amazing, the plot lines are interesting and gripping and make sense even though I don't have all the pieces to any of them, the characterizations are fantastic, the adventures are great, the mystery is great, the whole thing is just so perfect. I really hope you come back to this one sometime. *crossing my fingers*
Lots of love, and happy writing.

Ohmigods, she's so stupid right now. Stupid, stupid, stupid. Still making assumptions about Ian's parentage. It's driving me up a wall.

I KNEW it! Of course Rose isn't his mother; that wouldn't make any sense. This makes much more sense. Melody's just an idiot.

Ooh, this is interesting. Doctor Norma Jones. I be she's related to Melody somehow. And Ian (who is totally Melody's kid, don't tell me he isn't).

The first chapter ended up being really confusing by the end. I almost gave up, but I decided to do a few chapters more. As I went on, there were some aspects that I found interesting, and the overall idea definitely has potential. However, I'm still finding more of it confusing than the pluses can make up for.

There is so much going on and I'M NEVER GOING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TO MELODY AND JOHN, AM I.

She was never Melody Williams. Sticks of celery? He usually only wore the one. She met Rose? When?
By the way, about that Screwtape Letters crossover. The near murder of Peri, as it puts it, was the result of a faulty regeneration. He wasn't in his right mind. A betrayal time has done nothing to heal? When did Amy say he betrayed her? The Dream Lord wasn't Satan, though that writer would like him to be.

Ah! I hadn't caught up on this in ages, but I have now. It's still lovely, and your voice has a wonderful poetic quality to it. I'm deeply traumatized by the false wake ups though, and ask that Melody never ever sleeps again. It's the only way to be sure. I know you're probably busy, but when you do get time, I look forward to your next update!

Come back :) we all miss your gifted writing.

Fantastic story. Looking forward to more chapters.

Please update! Is melody awake? What happened?!

*gets on ffn for the first time in a while because NaNo, checks favorite stories, sees this one at the top meaning it has been updated recently*
*literally, audibly, screams*

gah, I just love this story and these characters so much and my heart breaks for Melody and Ian and argh the feels-

Just wanted to tell you again how much I love this story.
(also kind of hint at how much it's killing me, like a good book will)

WHAT? AGG? I just finished Day of the Doctor tonight and I don't know how much more aggghhhhhh I can take!

Glad to see an update! Love this story so much!

Rose would tear open the universe to get back to him? Didn't Rose herself say how dangerous it was?
By the way, about that Screwtape Letters crossover. Peri was near murdered? Amy was betrayed? When did Doctor Who say these things?