She was never Melody Williams. Sticks of celery? He usually only wore the one. She met Rose? When?
By the way, about that Screwtape Letters crossover. The near murder of Peri, as it puts it, was the result of a faulty regeneration. He wasn't in his right mind. A betrayal time has done nothing to heal? When did Amy say he betrayed her? The Dream Lord wasn't Satan, though that writer would like him to be.

Ah! I hadn't caught up on this in ages, but I have now. It's still lovely, and your voice has a wonderful poetic quality to it. I'm deeply traumatized by the false wake ups though, and ask that Melody never ever sleeps again. It's the only way to be sure. I know you're probably busy, but when you do get time, I look forward to your next update!

Come back :) we all miss your gifted writing.

Fantastic story. Looking forward to more chapters.

Please update! Is melody awake? What happened?!

*gets on ffn for the first time in a while because NaNo, checks favorite stories, sees this one at the top meaning it has been updated recently*
*literally, audibly, screams*

gah, I just love this story and these characters so much and my heart breaks for Melody and Ian and argh the feels-

Just wanted to tell you again how much I love this story.
(also kind of hint at how much it's killing me, like a good book will)

WHAT? AGG? I just finished Day of the Doctor tonight and I don't know how much more aggghhhhhh I can take!

Glad to see an update! Love this story so much!

Rose would tear open the universe to get back to him? Didn't Rose herself say how dangerous it was?
By the way, about that Screwtape Letters crossover. Peri was near murdered? Amy was betrayed? When did Doctor Who say these things?

You come back now, you hear?

Really liking this story. Your plot lines are unique and I find your characterizations of 10.5 and Melody to be well done. Hope to see more!

Still think Melody's his mom. Also, I'm guessing you're a Firefly fan. Am I right?

Oh, dear Melody. Can I just hug you and say that you're loved?

Aw...
But wait I thought she was-Ian's...but...
argh.

come on, just grin and be happy for a while

and we're definitely not thinking about a Pete's World Madame Kovarian who would take Melody, we're really not. At all. Not happening.

- Gallifrey, a million million voices all crying out at once, suddenly silenced.

Nice Alderaan reference. :)

"Hello Sweetie."

I die. I die a happy death and then rise as a very jubilant phoenix. Especially with your description on how those words flow and how he starts with River and ends on Melody.

Then all her thoughts on how private she keeps her parents and River. Then his description on how River would volunteer for both of them.

And you end with that incredible twist! Bravo! Love this chapter - just as I love all of them.