Reviews for Waterfall Beginnings
71star chapter 7 . 7/10
OMG!
You have to finish this!
I am SO loving it!
71star chapter 6 . 7/10
I was shocked about Edward...
Peter and Jasper can guard me anyday...
71star chapter 5 . 7/10
Oh no!
I bet Jake was growling because he smelled Jasper's scent...

I love the way Jasper is teaching Carlisle self control...

Great chapter!
71star chapter 4 . 7/10
LOVE this brave Bella...
And who wouldn't LOVE a flirty Carlisle...
71star chapter 3 . 7/10
This is SO out of the norm for me...
I don't read Vamp stories very often... But this... WOW!
You've humanized Carlisle SO well...
And the fact that it's Carlisle I love too... Because he's already so 'humanized'...
I LOVE Charlie as well...
So over protective...
71star chapter 2 . 7/10
;0)
Loved their first meeting...
Glad she didn't die... :0)
71star chapter 1 . 7/10
So glad I looked you after your fantastic reply!
I'm loving this!
Love when people write non-cannon couples!
:0)
pegasus5406 chapter 7 . 3/7
Oh yeah, please continue this story...I love it as I do all your stories...thanks hon...huggs. Peggy
Night69Raven chapter 7 . 3/3
please update soon as you can please
Night69Raven chapter 7 . 3/3
awwwww that was just so cute
My Eyez Are Watching Everyone chapter 7 . 2/2
Loooove this!
teamwolfaltw chapter 7 . 11/29/2015
Hi I really liked this story and it was recommended by whitewolflegend lol love there stories too x
MinaRivera chapter 7 . 9/20/2015
I'm so sad there's no more, but hopefully you will add soon? *big puppy eyes*
I like how you added a few things in the BPOV of the date, how she noticed certain things. I really think she's about to make the connection between the Cullens and the stories Jacob shared with her.
I love this Carlisle, he is so sweet and just swoony. Looking forward to more of him ;)
xoxo Mina
MinaRivera chapter 6 . 9/19/2015
How cute is Carlisle getting all excited over a phone call? I just wanna squish him! And man, something tells me Charlie knows more than he lets on. I'm shocked Bella hasn't made the connection yet, but I guess it's coming? AND SQUEEE! A DATE! CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT!
Also, I was just about to ask you last chapter if Bella was still Edward's singer when that happened! Welp, guess that answered my unasked question. Now, can you please fix this line: "He has just scented his La Tua Catante." You're saying "He has just scented his the your singer." See how awkward that reads? It's something I've seen in a LOT of fics, and it sorts of like a pet peeve of mine. What it should say is: "He has just scented his Cantante." That's it. Okay, that's all that I had to comment on it. Sorry.
OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! xo Mina
MinaRivera chapter 5 . 9/19/2015
I had to google that sex position, not gonna lie. LOL Way to go, Edward! *high fives him*
Did Jacob smell Jasper and Alice? They went to her apartment to pick up another pair of shorts. which probably triggered the shift. In the books Jacob was happy and he was having a great day, and for some reason it triggered the shift. Same here, he was having a great time and suddenly felt threatened. Hmmm... Guess I'll have to keep reading! ;)
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