Reviews for JIA Case Files : Street of Tokyo
Aldraia Dragonsong chapter 10 . 1/29/2019
A truly lovely story, binged the whole thing (well, almost done with binging the whole thing, but details). I noticed a couple of typos in this chapter, though, and the first one is really confusing.
[Aoshi glowered. "You had that the whole time he asked?"]
I think you meant to put: "You had that the whole time?" he asked.
["It's going to be fine," Sano said, as they walked up the stiars.]
Last word is supposed to be spelled 'stairs'.
Really enjoying this, moving on to the next chapter right now!
cj-the-fool chapter 12 . 9/10/2017
This was a beautiful story...Damn i never thought I'd say this about an action packed fanfic...but it was more than the run of the mill dishoom dishoom story...I v can't get over Enishi's ending...he was able to give Kaoru his heart... Usually i am a staunch supporter of kenkao but... Enishi stole my heart in this fic... Although their interaction was bare minimum... I really wish in the next life they get to unite as lovers..
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 12 . 8/6/2015
I am glad that everyone is okay in the end, especially where Misao got to the end what she wanted, Aoshi. Very good story, it is nice to know what will happen in the sequel.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 11 . 8/6/2015
The scene between Kaoru and Enishi was really special. I hope that Kaoru is well and that others can come out of this soon.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 10 . 8/5/2015
Wow, it was a shame that at the end Yumi caught both Sano and Megumi, but it was expected since Megumi never leave a wounded person just to save herself. Misao is very impressive and I like her to show Aoshi that can take care of herself.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 9 . 8/5/2015
Very good Kaoru can handle helicopters, it is something quite new. Good way to get Aoshi has no choice but to go to Osaka. Was good interaction between Sano and Megumi, Ohh the final part is interesting, I would not expect to see Yumi.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 8 . 8/5/2015
I liked the scene Aoshi and Misao was very good. So Kenshin wants to spend more time with Kaoru, maybe later. And what happened to Sanosuke and Megumi, I really hope that they also have some action.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 7 . 8/5/2015
If Enishi is Neechi, what will happen to him when he finds out that Kenshin was the murderer of his sister, a disaster is coming. It's nice to see that they formed a family without blood ties.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 6 . 8/5/2015
Wow that scene at the hospital was very good, I really did not expect to Misao suddenly appear and be an expert in bombs. With that Hiko finally appeared, this is getting very good.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 5 . 8/5/2015
That rather than Misao came on time with Aoshi, now he has more time to come up with Kaoru, I hope Kenshin can do something, and aside to help with the bomb in the hospital, it seems that everyone will have to run for their lives.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 4 . 8/5/2015
I liked that Kaoru was able to leave their state to face Enishi, the hospital was also funny, Sanosuke and Megumi fighting while criminals try to draw the intention of both. The last part left me in suspense.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 3 . 8/4/2015
Luckily Kenshin came close to help Kaoru, after all Greek Ouzo bottle unhurt, very typical of the situation. Sano has not woken up yet? Megumi is rightly worried about him, after all it is uncommon for a person being shot in front of her.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 2 . 8/4/2015
Interesting, so they misled Kenshin for him to return with Hiten, at least he will not betray Kaoru yet.
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
This story really has a good start and I think this will be very interesting.
SunBinamra chapter 12 . 7/19/2015
Awesome story! I love the idea of Aoshi playing big brother - don't ask me why, it's probably OOC but it's still so cute. I love the way you write all the characters actually...

And of course, the plot was fantastic. Love this series!
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