Reviews for Alicia and Peter Episode tags collection
jalna chapter 12 . 12/6/2015
thank you for your story. i always though that they never fall out love with each other. sure they were other people but nothing who chalenge raly what they had or what they share. still after 20 years she was taken by his charm, the charisma, the power and sensuality and even the hint of danger she feel and he exude. if she was honest with herself, she always know he was not a saint (santa). even when she meet him, she know he was ambitious, he was a charmer, he was dangerous, she choose him against him back there and after in her life they were numerous time she choose him over will. because she know will with all his charm and good nature or defaults was not half the man peter was, he didn't speak to her inner nature like peter. sure life and a way to selfrespect herself made her go to will but even after all the betrayal, he was the only one knowing her exactly the good and the bad and not judging her but love her the same. of course in the public eyes she stand by him but in truth she reject him once without trying to understand that somewhere she failed him because maybe motherood and confortable life make her forget that he can't be perfect to be at this place and she make him believe she didn't want to heard what his life was being a politician (even if she know he was loving it, he was made for that, a true politician by nature) but even him needed someone at his side understanding him and forgiving him. he was alone and he made a mistake she make him pay day by day never forgiving completly because she was too much in love with him for that, they were never indiference between them, always fire, passion, jealousy, strong feeling even in distaste but in the end they were always so much in love. they understand each other perfectly and together they could do everything, she always believe in him, know he was the best in whathe was doing, even at their worst she believe he was the best governor or everything and she know he can be the great president of america states one day with her in his side fully and completly (she was in politic now but she was not a true politician she know it and without him she will never had succeed but she was happy to try). maybe the times has come she show him, it was him she choose everytimes,he was always there for her and it was time she was there for him also and not just on eyes public.
Goodwifefan chapter 12 . 3/11/2015
This was really sweet. I wish they could be this way on the show and really BE there for each other like this. :( thanks for sharing this! x
Believe78 chapter 12 . 3/9/2015
I'm so glad you posted this and hope we could see anything like this on the show. Well, but this show just talks about unimportant things. The important things stay unsaid. That's why it is great to have stories like yours that address some issues.
The way you wrote it, it makes total sense that Alicia would turn to Peter, who went through campaigning more than once. He could be her most valuable ally if she let him. It was nice seeing them share their fears and that Alicia somehow understood that politics change a person.
Thank you for writing this :)
peternalicia chapter 12 . 3/9/2015
really good - loved it...please how they communicated without having to get physical. starting to get somewhere properly!
Monibolis chapter 12 . 3/3/2015
Great fanfic, I love Alicia and Peter actually talking and helping each other. Fantastic
Claire chapter 12 . 3/3/2015
this was amazing. Really loved it. Great job xxx
Kikidevil17 chapter 12 . 3/3/2015
I am sooo glad your muse is back and you posted something new! And wow Alicia and Peter actually talking that totally feels completely foreign to me LOL. Since these two never talk! It would be great for Alicia to talk to Peter, who actually would understand the loneliness that are political campaigns cause he has done them so many times!

I am glad they felt sleep together the image is sooooo cute! And Grace 3 I love that kid, loves her mama so much!
Carame chapter 11 . 9/25/2013
Hot story! Love it
teamWilson chapter 11 . 9/25/2013
Wow, that was fast! lol. Geez I should ask you for things more often! haha. I really loved this, especially reading all of the conflicting emotions of Alicia, it was great! You know how I love my angst and this was the perfect balance of angst, emotion, and desire :)

I hope maybe you'll feel inclined to write for these two again soon :) Thanks again for this wonderful gift!
Steffili chapter 11 . 9/25/2013
:) haha nicely done. Very cool of Randy to get you to write this :D I liked it and makes me want to rewatch S1 right now. :) S1 Alicia was amazing.

Poor her, wondering if he still found her attractive has my heart breaking every time I read it. :( And I get that she would be overwhelmed afterwards and that it's almost too much for her to handle.
ChastityLaneChaste chapter 10 . 5/8/2013
Nice collection
hell of a lot better than railwhatshername god knows why you keep lying to that little troll's face. Stop being mean to her and just let her die quietly. TELL HER THE TRUTH! SHE SUCKS!
Kikidevil17 chapter 10 . 5/6/2013
EEEKKKKKK! Soooooooooooooo fucking sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! I would have killed if he would have kissed her, I would have flat out DIED! That was all that moment between them needed! Sooo amazing! Thanks for writing!
Kikidevil17 chapter 9 . 5/6/2013
Ohhhhhhhh GOSH! I would give anything for Alicia to just be honest, like for real! To tell Peter what she is feeling for Will cause is not fair to either of them. I think she needs to come to terms with her emotions. I think your first paragraph gets to the point very well, she cannot shake these feelings for Will, these attraction are haunting her, thats why she says at the end that she feels "unfresh" because her body is making her feel this way. But the decision to be with Peter was made in 4.21 and she decided without the Will influence. Great read, I really enjoyed this!
teamWilson chapter 9 . 5/1/2013
Wow, this was really well done! Very emotional and touching. I only wish that this would happen in the series but I think it's a safe bet not to hold my breath for that, lol. They do deserve a fresh start like this though, with no secrets surrounding them. Their heartfelt conversations and vows to each other we're very well written, you did a great job with this one :)
teamWilson chapter 10 . 5/1/2013
SQUEEEEEE! Josie, this was so cute and sweet! She felt like smiling. Awwwww! He really does have that effect on her doesn't he? Thanks for brightening my day with this, now I'm smiling too :)
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