Reviews for Three for All, or, Princes of the Universe
fanfictiongrammarstory chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
That's another what if scenario. That's a great one. Good job on contributing fanfic to the breaking bad fanfic community :)
Guest chapter 15 . 10/11/2015
Really want to see how the three of them take over the world! Love this combo..unique. loved this story too. Is there going to be a part 2? Much thanks xx
alexisg200 chapter 10 . 5/3/2014
short chapter):
Lily chapter 9 . 2/22/2014
Aaah, my poor Jesse! What's gonna happen? Wow this story is so creative and unique, and really well-written - please update soon!
guest chapter 9 . 12/30/2013
this is great. I'm excited for an update! miss breaking bad so much!
Yammy1983 chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
great story!
lalyari chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
Yay, update! So, Gale joined Jesse in the ranks of Walt's faithful followers. Would Walt's protective instincts extend to Gale, I wonder?
Aaand now even Gale, who is utterly besotted with Walt, starts to see something ominous in his behavior. Good for him.
Viviane Renard chapter 6 . 3/13/2013
Your writing is so good! I love this line:

"He was overwhelmed with memories, none of which he particularly wanted to touch on."

It's such a simple sentence, yet conveys so much about Jesse's life. I love that about your writing. Your word selection and phrases are precise yet beautiful, striking the heart of the matter Keep up the great work!
lalyari chapter 5 . 1/30/2013
You are doing a wonderful job with POVs in this story - I think you have all three voices down perfectly :) Looking forward to the next update. I wonder when Gale realizes that being Walt's lab partner means putting up with his particular brand of crazy! XD
Viviane Renard chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
Glad to see an update! More Walter-centric thinking. You capture his selfishness perfectly.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
Their conversation in the trunk was oddly adorable.
RavenGaleSpencer chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
XD Now THAT'S the asshole Walt we know and love. Classic him.
RavenGaleSpencer chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
After finishing Season 5, my bf and I decided to watch the Pilot again just for comparison's sake, to see how far they had come. The part where they're about to cook in the RV for the first time, and Jesse's all uncomfortable as Walt strips down to his underwear and puts his apron on? Yeah, your scene with them in a "compromising position" in the trunk and Jesse's hands are near Walt's crotch totally reminded me of that. :P
Mas chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
I wanna read more!
Viviane Renard chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
Gotta love Gale. He's the only one with a sound head on his shoulders. For all the bragging Walt does about his intelligence, his pride is the size of Texas and usually gets in the way. It's an interesting story and I hope you continue it!
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