Reviews for Belong
Razer Athane chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Yo.

Your sleepiness shows. A few extra fullstops in places after ellipses. 'Mockinjay' instead of 'Mockingjay'. Formatting seems a bit choppy (i.e. line, new paragraph, line, new paragraph continuously; not going to pull you up on this but you can put a lot of those paragraphs together still).

"But now…the revolution was over. Does that also include Peeta's feelings for Katniss?" - Loved this. Questioning not her feelings, but his. Really great to see this in Peeta.

"Nightmares can't hurt you. I'll always be here to remind you that." - Loved this too. Strong wording.

Loved the ending, nice job!