|Reviews for Will you accept me?|
| kahralove chapter 16 . 12/21/2013
Hahaha..this chaper is funny and interesting, keep up write more :)
| Knightleather chapter 15 . 9/13/2013
How about if you write more? This is interesting, I hope you must write more about Cara and Kahlan in your story, knowing that Krystal have beast inside of her may be Cara have a same beast inside of her too but more powerful so Cara can be the one who safe kahlan from Rahl and be the hero and leader in the end...*shrug, good story...hope you continue..thank you
| SapphoSensei chapter 15 . 8/14/2013
This review is a general overall review of chapters 1 -15:
You have an interesting premise for your story. The plot is solid enough. A great OC. That said, a lot happens but with little to draw me in emotionally. What your writing lacks is more depth. You need to paint the reader a broader picture. Think of the 5 senses. Taste, touch, sound, sight, smell. Bring in more descriptions.
That said - the story has an 'epic' quality which makes it fun to read, plus Krystal is very interesting.
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
Those mason girls are like ninjas !
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/15/2013
Hope Cara can rescue Kahlan with sweetest side of her... Yay looking forward for next chapter... :)
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/17/2013
Nice story, I hope in the next chapter have a lots of Cara's action, looking forward for this
please, update soon :)
| oftherose13 chapter 14 . 5/15/2013
Now time for a valiant rescue for Khalan by cara and a swift get away by all :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/28/2013
Cara better rush in before khalan ends up in bed with darken!
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/24/2012
Really like this story hope u continue !
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
Awh too cute ! This chapter was too cute
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
What's cara got hiding ? I wonder ?
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Party crasher for sure. Wonder what this morphed beast is ? And how cara know of it
| sweetlove14 chapter 9 . 9/8/2012
plz update soon
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2012
Good job ! I like very much a nearly Next soon I hope ! :)