Reviews for Blessed By Victory
Angryboy13 chapter 6 . 5/3
I thought that Pikachu's learn Electro Ball naturally?
Angryboy13 chapter 1 . 5/1
ASH GETS A SHINY VICTINI!
Lucky bastard...
ivanganev1992 chapter 9 . 2/26
Ch 9

Ash lost Ghastly from their ghost zone. That is one of the strongest .

And the trapped ancient warrior spirit which hidden seal and the waiting maiden trapped in waiting in the zone.

What next.
ivanganev1992 chapter 3 . 2/26
Ch 3

Scanning their skills would make them more powerful with better strategies.
berryboychris chapter 6 . 2/15
What ya gonna do about latias?
berryboychris chapter 4 . 2/15
This story is so good can't wait for next update
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
Man, I can't wait for the next chapter...
'tini and ash is so Cute! I hope you change your mind about the pairing...
Well, that's for you to decide ok?

Keep up the good work!
Toolazytologin chapter 5 . 11/18/2015
I started this story hoping for a good, OP trainer story. What I got, though not poorly written in many ways, was a story where Victiny, the Victory pokemon, struggled to beat Brock's Onix. Sorry, but that kinda ruined the story for me.
SummerSpyder chapter 9 . 9/14/2015
FYI ash pidgeotto is female
Xyoras chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
The nickname I would have chosen would have been, Your new friend who follows you like a stalker or loyal pet and will stand up for you but some how always gets in trouble and has had the state police on the first and the county police on the second occasion of being bullied and has had bullies both held back or even expelled before, but that is more of my job description as a thirteen year old boy in Michigan.

Also most different beginnings stories start when Ash is 5 but I guess 7 is the lucky number.
Scion Of Legend chapter 9 . 7/14/2015
This is one of the better Ash starter swap stories I've seen out there.

The writing overall is very good, from the pacing, the dialogue (the interactions between Ash and 'Tini are notable), the action scenes, and anything else I missed.

This feels like it was taken straight from the anime and put in a fic, yet without the usual part of things dragging on.

Shame that this story has been on hold for so long. If you ever make another chapter, could you let me know? I'd like that a lot. Adieu!
Sharp121shooter chapter 9 . 6/28/2015
G
HumanBeing chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
Can't wait for next update because this is the only victoryShipping I found so far and its a real good one too.
alex chapter 9 . 1/8/2015
Please update soon I'm reading " the altomare ace " fan fiction
avidreader-everafter chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
its so fluffy im gonna die so in other words great job this is a cute start but it also seems to bear potential for a deep story hope for the best thanks for writing. :) everafter
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