Reviews for Fifty Shades More
Jojo31055 chapter 32 . 5/15/2018
Wonderful story. I love how you tied all the strings up in the end. Thanks. Can't wait to read the next story.
Supergirl503675 chapter 9 . 4/29/2018
I usually read fan fiction because, I want Ana to be strong and independent. I wanna skip all this clingy needy not know what she wants ana.
bella0609 chapter 8 . 3/24/2018
I believe she made a huge mistake!
bella0609 chapter 7 . 3/24/2018
I'm floored! I'm confused! How can Ana be with the submissive that was with Christian? I just don't get it...?
bella0609 chapter 6 . 3/24/2018
Your writing is very good, but I am still having a difficult time reading this...
bella0609 chapter 5 . 3/24/2018
That is the last thing I thought would happen...
bella0609 chapter 4 . 3/24/2018
Uh oh! Doesn't seem promising...
bella0609 chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
So John gave her meds for depression?
Christian won't like that!
bella0609 chapter 2 . 3/24/2018
Who's not watching Grace now? Huh?
Happy to get back to this... totally got distract with sick parents
githarington chapter 5 . 3/16/2018
Have you intentionally made him abusive?
Guest chapter 8 . 2/20/2018
I am sorry I can't even finish this. If she really wanted separation she wouldnt fall into his farms so easily. Shouldn't have read, the reviews were right
A newcomer2016 chapter 24 . 1/5/2018
Why does she mention his/their billions so often? Even makes mention that at least half is hers and then turn around and say his money doesn't matter. Who is she trying to convince? Herself? This version of Ana seems to be shallow and focused on her husband's billions.
Lleonardo1 chapter 8 . 12/26/2017
I have read many FS fan fiction stories and yours rips my heart out. I feel like you've misrepresented Ana's ability and drive for BDSM towards the later books. The Cheating doesn't work for me it's just wrong.
Erikaahhh chapter 22 . 12/1/2017
one thing that I have noticed while reading is the inconsistency of the spelling of the family name Grey as there is also Gray commonly used in some of the chapters so far. I know it's a small thing but it's a little pet peeve of mine hahaha. great story btw no matter what the other reviewers say. it takes a lot to publish your own story out there and this is definitely different than the others I've read so kudos to you! I know I couldn't spent the time to write any type odbstoey long term down!
amanileo001 chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
WTF THIS IS THE STUPIDEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. I MEAN HE CHEATED ON HER AND SHE STILL WANT TO ME WITH HIM AND GET DRESSED FOR HIM DUDE! AND WHY IS SHE SAYING EVERYONE'S NAME MULTIPLE TIME IN ONE SENTENCE!
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