|Reviews for Friendzoned|
| Aiko Tachibana chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I finally found the story I have looking for!
please update soon
| FTReader chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
I LUV this So much, how did i not see this eariler? I REALLY hope you contine this and i gotta say, this story needs WAY more love, its so awesome and i cant wait for the next chapter
| LaraLumos chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
Though short, it is one of the best high school Naruko fanfiction I've ever read. Very interesting, and a very well done characterization. An enjoyable read, and as such I can't wait for the next chapter.
Ps: I'll be adding your story to my community. Its title is self explanatory :)
| Ninja99 chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
I LOVE IT! its so cute, and very funny! I enjoy this story alot!(: update soon!
| XxanimeaddictxX chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
SASUNARU FTW I DON'T EVEN CARE IF NARUTO IS A GIRL SASUNARU !
| susl chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
just read your story and like it) pls update soon next ch
| ajwa chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
i love the plot and i think that you are heading in the right direction. But, my opinion would be that you don't nar
| Unknown chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
I love this story! I just wish you didn't take so long to update!
| Cairn Ramius chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
This is some good stuff.
| Naoko Matatabi chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
I'm hooked on the story already! And it's only the second chapter. I hope you continue it and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Vermouth chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
Very interesting fic, I'm enjoying the read immensely!
| cha chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
The only thing i can say is UPDATE SOON :D it was awesome!
| Mikey H chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
The first scene seemed really short and rushed to be honest, and the use of “Chat language/ Speech as if we hear Sasuke’s thoughts” really ruined the experience for me at least. (I believe I mentioned this when you first introduced the chapter to me). The intro of the chapter somehow feels out of place, as I was expecting an in-depth explanation of the setting yet only was informed of the weather and weight of his backpack, which left me with a black void instead of the incredible world that should be before my eyes.
The use of (), in mid story once again managed to completely take me out of the setting, and I do feel that you should have used italics instead as it is a much more professional way of handling situations like these.
Overall the whole scene just seemed like random blabbering from Sasuke, not really moving the plot along in any way what so ever, other than confirming the fact that he indeed is interested (Which was confirmed several times in chapter one).
The one thing that managed to save the scene, and kept me at the tip of my chair was the small part of dialogue at the end which felt so realistic and fluid that I often found myself imagining it in my mind.
The second scene was in my opinion better than the first one but I found myself skimming past the fighting, not really finding anything breathtaking to keep me baited. The dialogue in the end of this scene felt extremely awkward and forced.
The third scene basically had a mix of problems that the first and second scene had, once again failing to keep me interested too much.
My advice to you is to go back to the ideals that you used in the first chapter, focusing more on the interaction itself instead of trying to involve all these different directions as it is slowly but steadily breaking down what made the first chapter so brilliant. I still have hope in the fic and I’m sure that you’ll manage to turn it around.
Will await your next update.
| professionalVamp chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
Absolutely am loving the confused and slightly freaking out Sasuke :-P
| Uwaah chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
You updated! *o*
-Great chapter, I like that you got the Student Council thing in. But, if Naruto and Sasuke also got in, wouldn't that mean they have to quit the Material Arts club?
-Godt arbejde, held og lykke o!