Reviews for Too Close
KatastrophicKat chapter 24 . 10/9/2013
On to the sequel.
Oh- Did Charlie DIE?
KatastrophicKat chapter 22 . 10/9/2013

FINALLYYYYYYY!- Can they go home now? New York SUCKS!
KatastrophicKat chapter 18 . 10/9/2013
How the hell do you make those shots? I want to try these drinks!
Flaming Cocaine sounds interesting...
KatastrophicKat chapter 13 . 10/9/2013
You gave Alice a girlfriend right when Bella gets sucked into a wedding?

Heroic. ;)
KatastrophicKat chapter 8 . 10/8/2013
...What's a yard glass?
KatastrophicKat chapter 4 . 10/8/2013
So.. Is her leaving what makes Alice pissed? Hmm..
*carries on to next chappy*
KatastrophicKat chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I think this is good so far but I must say one thing and that's only because I used to work for them and you used our biggest competition...
Duracell WISHES they had our bunny!

That is all... *continues to next chapter*
Guest chapter 17 . 7/27/2013
if you liked RDR...please try RDR:Undead story zombies vampires warewolves etc

Heavy Rain
Hitnan Absolution
Silent Hill; Downpour
GTA; The Ballod of Gay Tony
Guest chapter 12 . 7/27/2013
for the record, if I had heard say that I would have;
1. Pissed myself laughing
2. Confiscated their games, they were obviously too stupid to play them.
3. Probably knock their heads sure it would make a hollow noise...this is why COD games were invented, for stupid people.

Im a gaymer myself ;) but id rather playstation
Akasha Hallows28 chapter 24 . 6/5/2013
loved it :) I like them together.
samaramorgane chapter 24 . 4/16/2013
I liked this storie!There was alot of drama!
coconut chapter 24 . 4/14/2013
OMG this story was amazing!. I love this Bella. I really can't wait for a sequel. I want more! ;-)
Neb87 chapter 24 . 4/14/2013
Good ending, like how you tied it all up. Its hard to end a story like this, you can just keep going but I think you did a good job, looking forward to the sequel! Added to authors alerts just for that D! Anyways loved your story, and I'm pretty sure i'm gonna love the next one too!
irishjedi4life chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
Good story for sure make sure to post in this one that the sequel is up soni can favoret that one to :)
ivory19110 chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
That was pretty awesome ending wish it ended maybe three hours later when they were done... not starting;). Anyway I loved this story!
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