|Reviews for Too Close|
| KatastrophicKat chapter 24 . 10/9/2013
On to the sequel.
Oh- Did Charlie DIE?
| KatastrophicKat chapter 22 . 10/9/2013
SCREW TANYA! SCREW KATE! EVEN SCREW ROSE'S HORRIBLE ATTITUDE!
FINALLYYYYYYY!- Can they go home now? New York SUCKS!
| KatastrophicKat chapter 18 . 10/9/2013
How the hell do you make those shots? I want to try these drinks!
Flaming Cocaine sounds interesting...
| KatastrophicKat chapter 13 . 10/9/2013
You gave Alice a girlfriend right when Bella gets sucked into a wedding?
| KatastrophicKat chapter 8 . 10/8/2013
...What's a yard glass?
| KatastrophicKat chapter 4 . 10/8/2013
So.. Is her leaving what makes Alice pissed? Hmm..
*carries on to next chappy*
| KatastrophicKat chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I think this is good so far but I must say one thing and that's only because I used to work for them and you used our biggest competition...
It's the ENERGIZER BUNNY, not the DURACELL BUNNY!
Duracell WISHES they had our bunny!
That is all... *continues to next chapter*
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/27/2013
if you liked RDR...please try RDR:Undead nightmares...new story zombies vampires warewolves etc
Silent Hill; Downpour
GTA; The Ballod of Gay Tony
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/27/2013
for the record, if I had heard say that I would have;
1. Pissed myself laughing
2. Confiscated their games, they were obviously too stupid to play them.
3. Probably knock their heads together...um sure it would make a hollow noise...this is why COD games were invented, for stupid people.
Im a gaymer myself ;) but id rather playstation
| Akasha Hallows28 chapter 24 . 6/5/2013
loved it :) I like them together.
| samaramorgane chapter 24 . 4/16/2013
I liked this storie!There was alot of drama!
| coconut chapter 24 . 4/14/2013
OMG this story was amazing!. I love this Bella. I really can't wait for a sequel. I want more! ;-)
| Neb87 chapter 24 . 4/14/2013
Good ending, like how you tied it all up. Its hard to end a story like this, you can just keep going but I think you did a good job, looking forward to the sequel! Added to authors alerts just for that D! Anyways loved your story, and I'm pretty sure i'm gonna love the next one too!
| irishjedi4life chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
Good story for sure make sure to post in this one that the sequel is up soni can favoret that one to :)
| ivory19110 chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
That was pretty awesome ending wish it ended maybe three hours later when they were done... not starting;). Anyway I loved this story!