Reviews for The Choice
Unicorn chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
This might have been hell of a story, but you seem real eager on letting good ideas go to waste, mate. Never start a good fic if you ain't gonna finish
PerpleNerple chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
jjcullen, you're very insensitive. You should review with CONSTRUCTIVE and RESPECTABLE criticism instead of blatant rudeness.

Don't listen to him/her Storm :P

Anyway, I liked the beginning but you published this all the way in 2012. Any chance you'll be continuing it? If not, there really isn't enough story to judge (fairly) your writing, but coming from a teenager myself, I thought you did great :)
SirAnusFungusMcChungusTheGreat chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I liked it the guy below/above me is a fart.
jjcullen chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Terrible writing with no talent