Reviews for Broken
VengefulProphet chapter 21 . 7/12
Good morning to everyone,except the person who wrote this
jose chapter 25 . 6/13
I think this Is a very interesting story and it really keeps you on your feet. I would like to see more fan fiction where aang just rants about all he's lost and such. nothing can really compare and you took it to a new level. I feel like in the show they sort of brushed off the genocide and I would look to see more emotion from aang in the show then just happy. but its a cartoon for kids so I guess that doesn't work. anyways I'm going off track. I loved you detail and your writing I found it very easy to imagine and follow on what your saying. great job. I would totally continue reading if you created more.
bookworm51485 chapter 7 . 4/22
Yeah, the concept is interesting, but your fan-worship of Katara is too evident in all aspects of this story and given that I can barely tolerate her as a character, I can't finish.
bookworm51485 chapter 4 . 4/22
I'm sorry, I will never understand why Katara was so popular. She was a judgemental, self-righteous bitch who seemed to think she cornered the market on suffering because 'I lost my mom'. No one is going to say that losing a parent isn't hard, but in the big scheme of things, and in the midst of a 100-year war, her suffering is actually pretty minimal in comparison to others. Yet she spent so much time judging people because of their responses to their circumstances, Zuko most of all. And of all of the people in the series, he probably had it the worst.

I'm not necessarily a Must Be Zukaang person, I actually like Zuko and Mai as well, I just don't like Aang with Katara... Or Zuko with Katara... Or Katara with anyone I like really... Stick her with some random background character who I don't care about being stuck with her for the next 100 years...
FoxyGirl2512 chapter 25 . 3/31
Could I possibly adopt this story and continue it for you? It might help you in your writing struggle.
FoxyGirl2512 chapter 3 . 3/27
It's good, and I read the whole story. Every chapter is great, but when instead of Zuko, which seems highly unlikely, have his friends; Katara and Sokka, captured and taken. It would make more sense seeing as Aang worries more about Katara and Sokka, mostly Katara, than Zuko. Think it over.
Dusty chapter 25 . 2/6
You know, if you haven't finished your story it's proper manners to label it DISCONTINUED in the description. That way people who don't want to waste their time reading an unfinished story don't have to.

Thank you.
Guest chapter 18 . 2/1
Guest chapter 14 . 2/1
My feels...
Guest chapter 12 . 2/1
Yayy! Die Zhao, DIE! Ejem, ejem...
Guest chapter 4 . 2/1
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
Typical: Mild Swearing and graphic rape :v
crazypianoman2194 chapter 24 . 11/6/2016
I literally cannot wait for the sequel! I loved it!
trepidon chapter 25 . 5/17/2016 last ch was the last chapter. ..damittt...ill miss you and your wonderful story of rape and torture! Tha ty. my favorite!
trepidon chapter 24 . 5/17/2016 is last chapter. ..what a great read!
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