|Reviews for Magnetic Dance|
| Ephemeral Glimpse chapter 1 . 8/16
Perfect pacing and the playful teasing by Ryoma seems right up his alley. The feels surged everywhere, and their 'dance' in the end was so sigh-worthy. Kudos!
| Ren-sama23 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
This story is just so cute! XD
| seireidoragon chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
This was a wonderful story to reading and the writing is spectacular!
| Lucy chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Oh, well. That was just great! Where do I begin?
The first thing I thought was remarkable was the way you managed to make Echizen cute, but not OOC. If you think about how Echizen acts with Momo (sleeping on his shoulder, seriously? I'd like to see him comfortable enough to do that with Kaidoh!) and how Momo acts with Echizen (one would think he believes Ryoma is a huge phone strap, from how much Momo simply drags him around), then you could certainly make a case arguing that your fic is actually canon.
When they do that training camp, especially... Not that they touch each other a lot on that arc, but that scene on the bus, when they're sleeping on each other certaily deserves a note here. While that is not uncommon, Ryoma's head isn't usually on Momo's neck, but almost on his arm. They're just... too close.
But I'm rambling.
Great fic! Keep writing!
| Daiki-chan chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
oh...god...it's fantastic...! their magnet dance...it's wonderfull and it can be so real that i want to appear also in the anime...
They are so perfect together!
| MaineHalfBlood chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
This round? Momo won every round.
This is great. loved it :))
P.S: that's my account. sucks I can't log in.
| this was chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
so good i just
| White Empress chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
And again, dkjdljlkjd too cute! Ryoma is so endearingly clueless and oblivious, yet so daring xD I really like him in your style- great job!
| Bb chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Wow! That was super cute. So fluffy and brilliantly complicated as hand holding and kissing is at that age. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Aww! This is so cute, and completely Ryoma-like. :)
| KisunaFuji chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
they r skipping practise? O.o
ohhh... tezuka will give them soooo many laps
| Miyavilurver chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
fkdlsjafas this is so perfect. i havent read a momoryo fic in forever but god, yeah this is pretty much why its my OTP. thank you so much for writing this piece of perfection. its so lovely
| Global Wolf chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
You make these boys so endearingly dumb. 3 Thanks for posting!
| sakura0617 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Please Please write more MomoXRyoma! Ahh I can't get enough of this couple, and your fics are just so enticing and sweet!
| Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
This is-! This is-! This is-! This is-!
Soo freakin-! GAH! ...
This story... is great. Like... SO freakin cute *spazz* I just...
This is a good story, and I loved it, like really!
Thank you for making it!