|Reviews for In the Kill Zone|
| Gimlifan8 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
| thrownhammer chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Don't mind that other review,Nicky was a basket case half the time. I think you did great, thanks for sharing. :)
| TheLastRider chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Well, the writing was fine, but I don't think it was in character. Nicky is a pretty calm, controlled woman. She rarely panicked, and your semi-excessive use of exclamation points expressed a sort of panic. She and Marie are opposite ends of the female spectrum, and I think the emotion you captured was more similar to Marie's than Nicky's.