Reviews for Blood Raining Night
GreatMountainTengu chapter 15 . 4/22/2016
Oh goody, this is a Vocaloid crossover too.
GreatMountainTengu chapter 10 . 4/22/2016
Let me guess: Lucy is a person in real life and you hate her guts.
GreatMountainTengu chapter 9 . 4/22/2016
That wasn't sexy. It was terrifying.
GreatMountainTengu chapter 8 . 4/22/2016
Mary...Laceheart?!
GreatMountainTengu chapter 7 . 4/22/2016
Shippo's a boy, for starters.
FishFace993 chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
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Lumera Lightstar chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
There are just so many flaws in this story that it is NOT GOOD. The characters that are cannon are so occ it hurts! The storyline has so many plot holes it is confusing, I got lost so many times trying to follow this story. Your oc is a GOSH DARN Mary Sue, Deus Ex Machina, hero who knows everything and has ALL the powers that the story has no life to it. Rei takes the actual conflict from the story because of her Mary Sueness. Some of the stuff here is taken from songs. Nothing makes sense. This is not a good story it needs a lot of repairs.
Butthurt chapter 3 . 3/29/2016
There was hardly any character development. And all the characters this author inserted were no where near their canon personalities. All the characters brought in from different animes was just too damn confusing. They hardly had any character or addition to the plot. This story would've been the same it the author just replaced them with ocs. Rei is way too Mary Sue. Her character is pretty much the definition of the term. All in all, this fanfic was t so fantastic.
Too many cannons chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
Adding characters from other animes constantly isnt a good idea. There's no explanation why all these characters share the same world.

Denmark and Reicheru really need to break up. Not only did she cheat on him, but also only thought about herself. But now Denmark is being even more selfish by not wanting to care for her when she needed him most. Look at them. They aren't a good pair. Reicheru should be single for chapters, later on get paired with a oc.

Same with Yuki
Do not pair up Sebastian, a demon butler, with Yuki, who should be getting punished by God for being a lazy sister, bad angel. Yuki is terrible at her job. She's Reicheru's big sister, guardian, let's her get away with destroying earth if she wanted to. Minna is fine, you need to let Aza be in the story a lot more, Aza is hardly ever in the fanfic and fanime.

And why does Reicheru want sex so bad? She's 17. She's still a kid. And a alcoholic too. again, 17, she's too young for sex, drinking.
Eri chapter 30 . 3/16/2016
This story is so bad in so many ways...
One can just hope you grow out of this ''weeaboo'' phase you seem to be stuck in...
Licken Chittle chapter 10 . 2/16/2016
I have a question.

WHY?
Julian2 chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
... ok
Annon chapter 22 . 2/9/2016
I believe Reicheru isn't fully to blame. Its very easy to see she doesn't realize she's not always right, she doesn't see when she's done wrong. Her sister is a damn angel, is her guardian. Yuki is terrible at her job. Freaking Yuki needs to scold Reicheru more, stop sugar coating her, stop babying her, teach right and wrong, learn to take responsibility. Rather than just say "good job" for ripping Lucy's horns off. No, bad job Reicheru. You're a murderer and a bully. Yuki needs to be the big sister. She let's her get away with almost everything, doesn't care. I'm pretty sure God would punish Yuki too for doing so bad at her job.
And if Reicheru is getting punished for everything she did, why are they not punishing Goku as well for the bad things he did?
Jacques chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
Beautiful gremmer woul r8 2/3
Sarah chapter 1 . 2/3/2016
*slow clapping intensifies* Good job. You probably made the most Sue-ish Borderline Sue (or maybe even a *gasp* Mary Sue) ever.

But really, she packed a *GUN* and then she pulls a sword out of nowhere.

I understand her father's a demon and shit.

Just

shE COULD OF USED HER GUN AND SHOT HIM

DID SHE JUST FORGET THAT IT'S THERE FOR SOME REASON

And she was born to two normal, average people. (Pretty sure the dad turns into the demon after he dies, from what I can tell.) Normal Normal does NOT equal neko-demon-vampire child. And she's 17. What's her cup-size, 68H?
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