|Reviews for The Great Devourer|
| DragonTurtle3 chapter 1 . 4/28
You say "It needed to know just what was in this galaxy." Because this chapter never specified when and how the Tyrant or remaining collective consciousness figured out they were in a different galaxy. Was it suppose to be because they can't hear the Hive Mind? How come they didn't figure they were being blocked by a powerful psychic event somewhere, or that they had emerged from the warp on a different side of their galaxy, out of rage?
You should mention another indicator, such as major star constellations missing, or the nature of the warp. Or fill in the blanks about Tyranid canon yourself, such as how they fertilize the ecosystem around them for farming. Make mention that that the Hive Mind is galaxy wide, and that you'd have to leave galaxy to be deaf to it.
| JaDe In NighT chapter 10 . 3/2
oh my god its not dead
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/2
Lol what? Banelings? Is this also a starcraft crossover?
| killgore444 chapter 10 . 12/3/2014
This is a really good story. Keep this up!
| Gustauve-Drakenhime chapter 10 . 11/27/2014
Ah, very Nice Genestealer depiction. They do fight like that - nascent telepathy and what not. Can't wait to see if they get eaten or not.
| Skelo chapter 10 . 11/27/2014
I love the genestealer scene. Super genestealers ftw! Btw plz infect Aniken with the virus; then have him breed with his wife and give birth to a super Swarm member.
| EvilTheLast chapter 10 . 11/27/2014
| WildCard-Yes Man chapter 10 . 11/27/2014
| Terror Dark Calws Army chapter 10 . 11/27/2014
| Hachichiyyin chapter 3 . 11/26/2014
Your story is basically a huge summary. It lacks details, characterization, world building, etc...
| Sora with an S chapter 9 . 11/1/2014
I love your logic: Blasters are weaker than Lasguns and therefore are basically useless against any non-Guard faction of W40K. A Star Wars vs scary monster story where the monsters are scary! Good work.
| FractiousDay chapter 9 . 8/4/2014
Given the lack of psykers and psychic things in general in the Star Wars galaxy, will the Tyrant think of alternative creatures to Zoanthropes and similar species of Tyranid? I imagine several Jedi corpses could be put together to form some new anti-Force creature, but they would be exceptionally rare, and as such the Tyranids would lack the use of psychic tactics that they were accustomed to.
| Bernard Karp chapter 9 . 7/31/2014
Will the hive ever attack desert planets like Tatooine or Korriban?
| DaLintyGuy chapter 9 . 7/27/2014
Just keep chugging away, it'll be done when it's done. :)g
| Deimos99340 chapter 9 . 7/28/2014
The Great Devourer walks among us!