|Reviews for Mortality|
| MayFairy chapter 20 . 1/30
This was really great, I've missed this story. Have I mentioned how much I love Damien? Cos it's a lot. I really hope he's okay.
| badkidoh chapter 20 . 1/30
Another great chapter.
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/14/2013
please don't stop writing this story, I love it, better than the real series!
| ElenaB chapter 18 . 11/20/2013
Desperate for an update! love this story! And Frank haha!
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/9/2013
please update soon, really want to know what happens next!
| badkidoh chapter 19 . 10/18/2013
Another great chapter.
| EIMIM chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
Aaah! I want to know what happens next!
I loved seeing Jack's child all grown up. He's like a mini Master, though slight less homicidal. And he got a chance to meet Ianto, yay!
I also agree on what you said about 'adrift'. That is one boring, annoying episode. I read a few redo's of it and they never manage to make it good. Glad you decided to skip it.
| Chocolate and caramel chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
Aww damn. Did not expect an update now..
Love you 'Damien'! if only you're real... *sigh*
Judging from Damien's comments, you still going to chop off our dear, beloved characters... I was hoping you would spare them a bit longer... Oh Ianto...Tosh...um.. you can kill Owen..
| MayFairy chapter 19 . 10/16/2013
I LOVE DAMIEN HE IS JUST
...perfect mix of Jack and the Master. Which is still weird in my head haha.
Can't wait for more!
| badkidoh chapter 18 . 10/10/2013
another great chapter.
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/8/2013
brilliant chapter as always, love this story!
| LucyAbernathy chapter 18 . 10/8/2013
Sarah Jane! Thanks for sending Frank over to her house. :D
| MayFairy chapter 18 . 10/8/2013
I did wonder if it was Sarah Jane haha. Frank is great though!
| EIMIM chapter 17 . 9/14/2013
This version of events actually make a lot more sense than the original episode. It was one of my least favorite Torchwood episodes but you made this chapter great.
Can't wait to see what happens to Frank!
... it's said that pork is really close to human meat (hence the saying 'long pork') so maybe pork would be healthy enough for the baby to survive on it? Just served raw, I guess.
| Chocolate and caramel chapter 17 . 9/13/2013
the birthing chapter... I want to read the birthing chapter...
urgh, is there a chance for River to meet Fem!Jack? just asking..