|Reviews for What the?|
| akin 'to38 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Waaa... Thats so...so...so young! Hahaha.. Anyway, so cute. But let me tell you (if you don't mind) that I notice how you spelt Ray's name during the first parts as Rey. It kinda confused me. And also the one 'sitting in the coach'. I guess it should be couch, right? Well, thats just my opinion. But if you'll ask me if I like the story, I'll tell you I enjoyed it. Really.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
YEY fun times, I'm proud too :DDD
| GabZ chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Wow it was cool, but weird! so I liked it XD
| Mett Berg chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Haha, what a fitting title...xD it was funny! Got a bit slack jawed reading Tala arguing with Rei (Ray, Rey...o.o...It’s R-e-i...) at the beginning...
But hey, I think Tala has potential! Except that I agree with Kai...makes no sense, Kai wouldn’t pick Bryan...(different spelling again!)
And for the end... you know I loved it, don’t you haha... Tala's second try at story telling was definitely better...mhm!
It’s your amazing way with words that put perfect pictures in my mind! (hope that made sense)
Kai smiled again! but he go to glare too...
...implied threesome...I saw that, you could have leave it like that!
More! (That’s me being demanding!) more of them!
I Love your stories :)