Reviews for Fable of Death
BreezyFan chapter 21 . 12/27/2012
Awww, happy ending! I read the whole thing just now, and at first I thought that there was gonna be a sequel or something cuz you had to cover a whole year, but you did that pretty neatly :p I loved this story when I started reading it, and I still love it! It's something else :p
mozzi-girl chapter 21 . 12/10/2012
Aww it's over... Sad times!
But this finale was amazing, Maltara was adorable and I even liked Oscar in this one, he was noble! :')
Everything about this story was sheer amazingness! (Is that even a word? Lol...) anyways, brilliant! I loved everything so much, one of my favourite stories. I LOVE fantasy stories, and your write them so well!


- Molly
Crimson Endings chapter 21 . 12/9/2012
"Mal..." It was Oscar. "You in there, Buddy?"


.FEELS. Walter's funeral. :'(

Ooh, Nat to Mal,I like the way
you think...for probably the only time.

Aww,I loved that little ending!

I'm sad to see this story end:'(
But it was written well,FRIEND!
I can't wait for more stories from you,my Utah,

mozzi-girl chapter 20 . 12/5/2012
Welp, I'm officially sobbing. Seriously, that was heartbreaking... And you say you can't write emotional scenes? Yes, yes you can! :') Great chapter Shelbeast!
Exciteedddd for C4D 2 :D

- Molly
Crimson Endings chapter 20 . 12/5/2012
Ooh,how about the most awesomest
title ever:Cause 4 Death 2.

Walter! .


Ugh,Oscar has to go & ruin everything!

Great Chapter,FRIEND!

mozzi-girl chapter 19 . 12/4/2012
Oh no no no no no! :O Not Walter... I had to literally restrain my tears in school when I was reading this... And oh the Maltara feels :')
I ADORED this, and YAAAYYYY! Cause 4 Death sequel! BEST THING I'VE HEARD ALL DAY! :D I can't wait, and this story is amazing... I love when you write fantasy, it's beautiful!
Can't wait for more!

- Molly
Crimson Endings chapter 19 . 12/4/2012
Hehe,yes!I support you &
hopefully you'll make a sequel!
I'll support you through it!

We're fighting!Yeah!

If only Natara heard what the
Darkness thingy said..

No final goodbye to anyone? Not even Natara...MY FEELS!

Yay,Mal survived!That's always good!

Walter?WHY?!I liked Walter!
He kinda reminded me of Alfred...
But,oh well,I'll go cry in a corner,FRIEND!

Mozzi-Girl chapter 18 . 11/26/2012
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! Hell nah! Not Walter! :O Literally, I'm like... I can't even... Wow. That chapter was AMAZING. Walter...
I'm emotional right now okay?! (I get seriously emotional when I'm ill hahaha) great chapter, I got so giddy when I saw this updated, you cheered me up!

Such a beast! :D

- Molly
Crimson Endings chapter 18 . 11/26/2012
Oh Kai:)

Ooh!They're fighting!Awesome!

Oh no,Walter!

Great chapter,FRIEND!

Crimson Endings chapter 17 . 11/21/2012
You're welcome!

Those people are acting like butt-holes!
I mean,seriously!I would happy to have
Mal as a king!Although I really wanted
him to kill Logan,he'll make a way better
ruler than Logan.

Ooh!You tell 'em Nat!All feisty & stuff!

Haha,Walter!Yes,Mal should marry Nat!

OH MY GAWD...Do you know how wide
my smile was at 'Kalaba Whiskey'?

Oh Kai...How I love our TOTALLY AWESOME
forensic tech!

Great chapter,FRIEND!

mozzi-girl chapter 17 . 11/21/2012
Awesome chapter Shelbeast! How many more chapters are left of this AMAZING story? Because I don't want it to end hahah ;)
I loved it... Loveddddddd it!

- Molly
Crimson Endings chapter 16 . 11/17/2012
Yay!No worry about Oscar!
That always makes me happy!

Yay,Logan surrendered!

It was not a friendly kiss,Mal.
I know that.

I loved the whole story about Jacob
becoming king & stuff.

Aww,I loved the Walter & Mal moment!
It was so sweet!

Great chapter,FRIEND!

Mozzi-Girl chapter 16 . 11/13/2012
This was a really awesome and interesting chapter! You're such a beast Shelby! :D I loved the little kiss and MAL IS KING! Whoop!
I didn't expect Logan to surrender so easily, really interesting twist!

Did I mention I LOVE when you do stories like this? They're so adventurous and I look forward to the updates all the time! :D

- Molly
Crimson Endings chapter 15 . 11/10/2012
Yay!Our sexy forensic tech's coming!Can't wait!


I feel so bad for Mal!Oscar don't need Natara!It's supposed to be like this:
boy meets girl.
boy falls for girl.
girl comes to her senses & dumps her douchebaggy boyfriend & gets with boy.

Great chapter,though!

Crimson Endings chapter 14 . 11/10/2012
If you keep up this silence between you two, you'll ruin a perfectly good relationship."


Their gonna fight!Dun-Dun-Duhhhh!

Great chapter,FRIEND:)

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