Reviews for A Hogsmeade error
HedwigBlack chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This is an interesting pairing. I think you did well with it though. I like how the Three Broomsticks was the setting and how it turned out to be problematic. I can imagine the Weasleys reacting. Good job with this one :)
Laura Scofield chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
I love the lightheartedness in this story, as well as the chemistry between Rose and Padma. But trust Rita to intrude on a personal moment :P
TamariChan chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Ahaha, great! Humorous and dramatic and altogether very good. I love how you characterized Rose and Padma.

The last few lines- "Why, Miss Weasley, have you no sense of *propriety? No, and neither do you." - are a stroke of genius, although you did misspell propriety. :)

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