Reviews for Captive Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the next chapter. I love it so much. You are an talented writer. |
![]() ![]() Good story, I loved the sexual tension throughout the chapters. |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! This story is so good and i love how u portrayed Gajeel and Levys character throughout the story! |
![]() ![]() There was no sex I was waiting for It to happen and it didn't |
![]() ![]() ![]() uhg, update soon plez, i hope you arnt dead(not that i expect that, just update pwez! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, god luff this chptr. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. hes taking care of her, thats sweet! even though I knew this was an M rateed fanfic, I am gonna ignor that little spot of naughtyness... |
![]() ![]() ![]() uhg. made me cry a bit. good job, tho! |
![]() ![]() I don't see why people would be disappointed with this chapter. It was something that added a little insight. The tragedy of her parents death is kind of a big deal to the romantic underlying of the story at least in my opinion. Adding things like this are good story writing tools cause you're not forgetting the beginnings of the story. I wouldn't count yourself out |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this before so many times, I was quite surprised that I didn't leave a review yet... or did I? I couldn't find it in the reviews so I'm posting one now, haha. This was one of the first fanfictions that I've ever read and it has stuck with me for a long time. The story was well written, the people were still in character, there were very "exciting" parts that I very, very much enjoyed, and did I mention you wrote very well? Good job, and thank you for producing such a nice story! I give you a 10/10. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was great ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you need to update this! It's great! I'm really hoping to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahah Cana lol so funny! love it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so much aawww love it! |