|Reviews for The Fifth World|
| Kylaesthetics chapter 11 . 4/6
I just read this whole thing in one go and I really really hope you continue!
You have the voices for all the characters SO SPOT ON! Amazing I hope you update at some point! ;u;
| PyroET chapter 3 . 2/8
I would point out, in reference to the potencies of holy water listed, that being hit with boiling water generally can cause rather bad burns.
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/6/2014
Ohhhhhhhhhkay I love this fic! It's a really exciting plot line and stuff, and I can't wait until YOU UPDATE. . I love your Crowley and Aziraphale characters at the start, and the start of their history together. I'm actually find it cool if Jesse and/or Adam got a bit more of an appearance in the plot, because I'd like to see Jesse getting mentored by Adam. I wish Dean weren't so anti-angel, but I kinda get why he's like that. I have no idea what Gabriel was doing, but okayAnyway, this fic is just soooooo good, I really love it, so please continue it!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
hahah, loved castiels reaction to crowley and aziraphale. I watched SPN and quite fangirled over it - but good omens went to my heart traight. I did read it one time, and at the end I started on the first page and red it again. I like the pace of the story, how you describe everything and give the characters time for their own world and worries - but poor jimmy... somehow he is already the star in this FF for me and I hope he will get a good ending!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
;_; oh my. I love it.
| FashionablyHospitable chapter 11 . 2/14/2014
I'm glad things are looking up. This chapter was great. I love the way your narration brings out the characters. And that certainly is a hook of an ending. :)
| A Smiling Cat chapter 11 . 2/9/2014
Well, at least Aziraphale is still below Zachariah's radar... And how nice it is that he met Balthazar already !
What is it about Chessie, though ?
And Dean is not a fan of Castiel for now. Well, Cas isn't very fond of Sam either, which could be problematic if they don't all have a little chat and explain what it is all about...
I still like your GO characters more than the SPN ones, but the whole story is great !
| Bookworm Gal chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
I'm glad to see this story continue. Great job and keep up the good work.
| codename pip chapter 11 . 2/7/2014
I haven't even read it yet I just need to flail about a little OMG YOU UPDATED IT THANK YOU YOU'RE AWESOME YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON YOU
| ImLostForever chapter 10 . 10/16/2013
NOOOOOO Where is the next chapter?! I love this fic so much. Though I may not agree with the exact back-story you've written for Zira and Crowley, I love the AU! Will there ever be an update? *puppy-dog eyes*
| FashionablyHospitable chapter 10 . 8/19/2013
| oceanlover4evr chapter 10 . 3/30/2013
Oh my. This is truly one gem of a story. I really enjoy your writing, and can't wait to see where it goes.
| FD chapter 10 . 3/6/2013
This is one of the best Good Omens stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
| atomic-oblaat chapter 10 . 3/6/2013
You still have fourteen chapters to go right? ...right? D:
I absolutely adore this story. All the little details you've put into it, the characterization, the pieces you've fit together, and even the ones you didn't (I actually like the two Crowley's being different people, especially now that SPN's Crowley is such a dick in the show)- these all add up to make this the best Good Omens/Supernatural fic and possibly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read in general. I wanted to cry when I saw that it hasn't been updated in almost half a year. I'm even worse at updating my own stories, so I guess I shouldn't have a right to complain, but I really do need more of this story. For survival and things. I just wanted to say, too, that I absolutely love the AU changes you've made. I think you've kept it very well proportioned between canon and what needed to be different for the purposes of your work. I'm trying not to keyboard mash. I'm just really super impressed.
I actually was so impressed and so taken by the devil's trap scene where poor Crowley hid in Aziraphale's sweater vest, that I drew up a fan art for you. It's just a pencil drawing, but I couldn't get the image out of my head, so I had to put it to paper. You can find it on my DA here:
I don't want to make it seem like I'm trying to rush you or pressure you to update, I'm just hoping you haven't abandoned this. It really is amazing. Cheers
| IdrilPuck chapter 10 . 2/5/2013
Omg this is sooooo Good! I love this soo much! U have integrated the two worlds so brilliantly! I hope that Cas will start to think for himself soon, and develop that adorable personality that we all love! I can't wait for his relationship with Dean to develop, I personally ship them, but even their friendship is just adorable.
I also LOVE what you've been doing with the Azi and Crowely relationship, I love those two! I wish they would both just own up to their love for each other already! Lol
Thankyou for writing this, I eagerly look forward to more. And I also love the footnotes! I kinda wished we could have seen the mistletoe scene though! Lol :)