Reviews for Wand and Shield |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is almost 30 years old, but he still behaves and complains like a child. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does the ominous messenger never use f****** names? It's an annoying plot device. It's like foreshadowing with a brick in a sock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly I'm not sure how this got so popular or so many reviews. He basically let's himself get repeatedly raped by Sheild because he won't use mind reading. What a joke. The over plot so far as been ridiculous and over the top. I simply cannot lost all the reasons why the interactions or decision making is so poor its not worth reading. 4/10 not recommended. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry can just use an overpowered detection charm so his magic neutralises the electronics, |
![]() ![]() ![]() there's an inconsistency, he's scared of getting shot, but he can stop bullets. there's also no Acton no risk in Harry's actions, there's no suspense, it's rather boring |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting needs updates though. |
![]() ![]() The magical equivalent to shield would be. M I zero. Or As everyone keeps on calling ithe faceless ones. Now Harry Potter should be pulled into the future right after he learns nothing about magic of rooms and stuff to become a professor in multiple categories. And generally pretty decent In everything else Now well I'm thinking is a time travel type of thing and this at this point in time where Harry Potter goes into the future helps a bunch of people? Then. Goes? Back into the past. But what is not written? In the history books is that Harry Potter goes to his own memory storage thinking. And he uses. Runic I'll give entered memory bowl thingy That literally teaches him multiple paths on the future and literally upgrades his mind using nanotechnology that inscribes rooms on to every particle of his being. Allowing him to literally store unimaginable. Amounts of information and have perfect recall and retention basically everything he knows he could bring up as if he just had a fresh Recourse of it. Not only that but Harry Potter imprints upon this young girl. If I were older ultimate versions of himself that were way smarter but not overrides. this harry potter basically What I'm saying is I want Harry Potter to be hyper knowledgeable. Multiple cores Willingly given by Harry Potter's. That died due to their reality pretty much collapsing. And using the same rooms to upgrade each core To give them many different little pocket expanded spaces for magincrease protection increased processing each increased perpetually upgrading. Itself add is aware of other chores and working together with it in a Is symbiotic way. Now this this would allow Harry Potter to basically learn any type of magic store copy and replicate the magic even if he has 0 potential to learn that magic. He can brute force and replicate it because he literally is able to create new chores inside of pocket universes inside his course that most of them are used for. Allowing Harry Potter's core to grow without restraint but still be attached to the body. Not only that but the nights used whatever excess core build-up to create a system of strings and nodes of the same material the chorus made out throughout. His body and his brain. Basically hes baking it satellite. The control factor over his magic is reduced by at least 579%. He can call up flame when he wants to and when hes enraged and he tries to call up flame without having a decent enough target he. Doesn't call up flame basically what I'm saying is magic. Is No longer Listening To him from a distant tunnel using a very poor recording that is 40 yd away from it metaphorically speaking. He doesn't need the Wand but he still uses it because he wants to limit the amount of power. He outputs and then he uses a staff for the same reason and then rings. It may be his own personal armor belt belt hole bunch of Runic arrays written on the outside of his skin and like nano scopic detail thanks again to. The Runic augmented nanotechnology. Is even a loyalty core Runic thing? Basically make yet satellite. It can't be used against Harry Potter or his allies or friends or lovers. Basically a robot tries to hack his nanights the robot ends up exploding before they even attempt to try thanks to temporal part of the nanite. Runic thingy that is tied into the loyalty thingy Basically harry potter became hyper intelligent class fifteen intelligent Unlocked in the process his atlantian Genetics and got injected with the silver is shopsins from stargate. The refined version that also increased his power flow drastically but at the same time it increased his magic resistance drastically because the stuff they couldn't remove. From the substance knockqwardraya. Whatever it's called. On top of that he is given the future version of The hollow's so he has two sets of it He has 2 sets so he experiments with the things the future ones 1st because you get always plant the future ones by Closing a temporal loop. Thus allowed the heavily changed past one's he has. Do not be Disappeared because because Harry Potter altered him so much from the future versions that he gave to his future self to plant sat where he can obtain the 2nd set a. AKA, a closed loop. I'm only suggesting this because. You need to heavily modify and stack. Harry Potter's deck in order for him to survive in the Marvel universe b******* happens there personally I personally as if the gods themselves warned that. Universe to be a soap opera universe except take away the Car crash entertaining part and replace it with superheroes. |
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![]() ![]() sigh ... This story and The Leaf's Naruto seem to be two of your best stories in my opinion. BUT you abandoned them. Abandoned right when they were really starting to get interesting. Not sure if it was writers burnout or what happened. Pretty annoying though, good stories on here are hard to find and then to find stories that are exceptional but incomplete to the point that it looks like they'll never be completed is downright infuriating. IF you're still around, would you at least post an update that outlines the direction you were going with these stories please? Considering your writing style, I'm sure you have/had an outline of where you wanted the stories to go and end up at. Would be nice if that was shared with your loyal readers, just so we have some closure to the stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m not sue Eid he’s still writing but I hope Harry is or will become an animagus |
![]() ![]() ![]() moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore noooooooooooooooooooooow plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huuuge new fan:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was binge reading this and stumbled into this chapter, one of the greatest chapters on FFN I have ever read. Congratulations you are an absolute badassThank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh! Harry is pretty pathetic in there, falls into stupid traps, this fact spied like a fool, trusted too easily, with her prize list, for a minor Harry Natacha will be dead before saying babayaga(you forgot what he did to Malfoy) For a mature and accomplished Harry, He will know Natasha's intentions with legimency and she will undergo a little interrogation on this world and its functioning with a good veritaserum or others and will be forgotten en faite la CCTV would not have to work with the magic of Potterverse In short, Harry is disappointing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus this Harry is annoying. Why do so many avenger crossovers feel like Harry has to be an angsty PTSD ridden edgelord? |