Reviews for Awakening: Rise of the Architect
Guest chapter 6 . 7/19
no offense man...but the first 5 chapters were good. this one...should be 100 percent rewritten.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17
Your an's are to long
Jordan chapter 2 . 6/17
Just so you know hokage is only for the village of the leaves but you kept referring to the other kage as hokage just a bit of an annoyance that can easily be fixed so I thought I would inform you
bjorn aleswiller chapter 2 . 1/21
So in other words your making Naruto like the Punisher... dark, brutal, but still a good guy... an
Anti-Hero
the souless knight chapter 6 . 12/24/2016
Seriously? You just let Azula blackmail naruto with just a simple tactic like that, whereas he has a rinnegan and other powerful jutsu, why don't he just control her mind or something like that
Voltrasin chapter 6 . 11/17/2016
Is this fic canceled?
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2016
Shit
aminblastbro chapter 6 . 6/23/2016
When are you gonna update its been two years so far.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2016
Interesting view... In my opinion... I would say killing the rapist would be wrong, only because it's to kind, I say kidnap him an put him in a dark 2 by 2 feet cell then if he attempts to sleep light it up with spotlights. If he's awake fill it with water for a second or 2 and play baby from Justin nonstop, o and feed him well, wouldn't want him dyeing from hunger now will we, until he either kills himself or his mind is mush, there is no justice in murder after all :)
tonyford3008 chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
m u
Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2016
It's been 3 years already ...
UPDATE ALREADY !
Guest chapter 6 . 11/2/2015
GG
Tenma Sosei chapter 2 . 9/14/2015
Tell me why NAruto didn't get with Shizuka or Kurenai? And Gaara and those two , no, just no. I mean really would've been beter if you did't do past pairings other than Naruto's.
kabs9000 chapter 6 . 9/10/2015
Thank you very much for the chapter this is awesome and amazing
kabs9000 chapter 5 . 9/10/2015
I absolutely completely and utterly loved this chapter
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