Reviews for Awakening: Rise of the Architect
paolotejadaj chapter 6 . 2/17
Really enjoyed the story, i hope you will updated soon
Wanna.smash chapter 3 . 12/13/2017
This is just to cringy to read.
mckertis chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Wow. A fucking QUARTER of the entire chapter is a worthless author's note ?! Simply amazing.
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 11/18/2017
Dropped the second I read "Hime". What were you thinking man?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/19/2017
no offense man...but the first 5 chapters were good. this one...should be 100 percent rewritten.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17/2017
Your an's are to long
Jordan chapter 2 . 6/17/2017
Just so you know hokage is only for the village of the leaves but you kept referring to the other kage as hokage just a bit of an annoyance that can easily be fixed so I thought I would inform you
bjorn aleswiller chapter 2 . 1/21/2017
So in other words your making Naruto like the Punisher... dark, brutal, but still a good guy... an
the souless knight chapter 6 . 12/24/2016
Seriously? You just let Azula blackmail naruto with just a simple tactic like that, whereas he has a rinnegan and other powerful jutsu, why don't he just control her mind or something like that
Voltrasin chapter 6 . 11/17/2016
Is this fic canceled?
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2016
aminblastbro chapter 6 . 6/23/2016
When are you gonna update its been two years so far.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2016
Interesting view... In my opinion... I would say killing the rapist would be wrong, only because it's to kind, I say kidnap him an put him in a dark 2 by 2 feet cell then if he attempts to sleep light it up with spotlights. If he's awake fill it with water for a second or 2 and play baby from Justin nonstop, o and feed him well, wouldn't want him dyeing from hunger now will we, until he either kills himself or his mind is mush, there is no justice in murder after all :)
tonyford3008 chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
m u
Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2016
It's been 3 years already ...
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