Reviews for Entanglement: A Day With Rin
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Perfect. Captured the feel of the characters perfectly. Thank you for this story. It's now canon for me.
zipzapdy chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, ... It was good
Smithrooks chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
An amazing short story. I love the way you portrayed Rin from Hisao's perspective.
Someone Else Took My Name chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Aw, this is so sweet and fluffy. You have no idea how much this made me smile, seriously, you're feaking grewt at this. You also caught Rin's personality well- not many people do- and although Hisao might have talked a bit more formally than normal, he's also characterized pretty decently.

If you didn't have that little stub of a sex scene- in the shower- this might've been one of my all-time favorites. Well done!
Fier66 chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
I must resist myself from 'Hnnghhhhhhhhh-ing after reading this. Damn this is good! Especially because it is Rin. The first girl I finished the story with and probably my favorite.
Aeteliam chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
This story feels like an extension of the original arc, very nicely done with realistic feeling dialogue for Rin.
Morrowing chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
I really enjoyed this story, what with Rin being the most deep character in the game imo. Like these other reviewers said, you captured their personalities expertly, and there's the appropriate occasional humor and cute romantic scenes as per her route. Tbh I feel like the quality and style of this would suit being in the game, and this would make a great ending.
Fahad09 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
This was really good.
You captured the characters of Rin and Hisao well. Well done.
cosmicmustache chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
I truly enjoyed your story! I think you did a marvelous job of capturing both Rin and Hisao thorughout, and I like the settings in which you put them.

The measure of a good story (like a good Visual Novel) is that you wish it wouldn't end. I had that reaction to this one.

Thank you! I'll be looking for more of your stories.
Nauro chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Hmm, I'm not sure if today is a good day for me to leave a detailed review, but all in all, I liked it.

Quite a lot, actually. It accentuates the right things and even as Rin is more understandable than you'd expect, she still carries her indirect way of being too direct.

Hisao as a scientist to be is a good image and his relation with Rin is a good afterthought to the game.

The only weird thing was Rin opting not to sell her art, which I both understand and disagree with. I think they would sell it, if someone wanted to buy, but wouldn't go as far as to have expositions. It would depend, I guess.

Anyway, thanks for a fun story,
nir chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Do more rin fanfic this one felt like it was straight from katawa shoujo.
theLeingod chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
That was spectacularly written and very, very adorable. I'm amazed at how well you captured Rin's eclectic personality; I could very easily imagine all the things she says and does here without it seeming at all out of character, and I can't say that about very many portrayals of Rin in fan fiction at all. Good show, sir.
LittleMissWolfie chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Fluff. Fluff everywhere.
Lol. Anyway, I absolutely ADORE Rin and think she should get more love. Her route made my cry hardcore.
Steven chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This was a great fic. Its style closely resembled the original, and Rin was exceptionally well-written; I could easily see something like this being in the game. I'm not sure I can say the same about Hisao, as a few of his lines seemed slightly odd, but the rest more than made up for it. Thank you very much for this awesome read. :)
DETHREAPER chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Great job, really do feel that you've captured the characters.
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