Reviews for Konoha's Mightiest Disciple
OnGuard chapter 14 . 4/7
Please tell me your still writing this story?
ShadowImageComics chapter 4 . 4/6
Nice flow in chapter 4. You got this story going good. Keep up the good work.
ShadowImageComics chapter 3 . 4/6
Okay, this is a interesting set of events as well nice flow of story into the HSDK series. You got me hooked.
OnGuard chapter 15 . 10/29/2014
You have noticed of course, the major lack interest in your story. There are a few reasons for that.

1. This is a big one. No matter how you look at it. No matter how you try justify it. Nothing you say is going to change this fact. Your version of Minato's and Kushina's death is insulting. Those were two extremely powerful characters. Too have them killed by one person, NO MATTER WHO IT IS, IS A JOKE.

2. Your fight scenes. Pay attention. Your recent fight scene between Choji and Kimmimaru, was a joke. It would have been impossible for Kimmimaru to escape when Choji had a good hold of him. Especially his legs.

3. If you don't know how something works, don't use it. Suikuken. I don't know what you think it is, but that's not it. Also, you better have a Damn good reason as to how Neji knows it.

4. Finally, this chapter. According to you, Konoha masters are pretty weak. That last part was a joke.

P.s. telling people to review is a great way to make sure they don't.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/31/2014
Whens miu showing up shes only shown up 3 times in 11 chapters
Awesome person chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
Shiratori's female...
Gunzgalore chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Clearmens chapter 14 . 9/10/2013
What a powerful and inspiring chapter! Cannot wait to see what happens to naruto's impact and how dangerously powerful he shall become even to pose a significant challenge to a master perhaps! How Sasuske will panick anytime he hears of naruto after a second encounter with his bigger henchmen particularly Neji and Jugo! For if his Dou Ki can be that explosive, of course it will require some time to reach lower mastership, then it must truly be powerful and terrifying if it could be lead to his explosision miles around him, cause the weather to react and still maintain his signature for his Dojo's elder to identify it without a doubt...hehehe...I cannot wait indeed.

You have really done a very good job and as a powerful fun of the Uzumaki heir and only Namikaze, I say congratulations! Kudos!
Any let his lineage express in his development for the 2 lines cannot be trifled with when one of such blood demonstrates both strength and talent, yet a simpleton and soothing balm to friends but a terror never before seen to his enemies and would be ones...
I am waiting for you to thrill me again.
Ja ne!
lazyguy90 chapter 15 . 4/20/2013
Totally awesome.

Kakashi against one of the One Shadow, Nine Fists? Badass.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/12/2013
this is a really intising story. im willing yo bet one of the members was kabuto, as for the others im not sure but i think one might be gaara
amberintheflame chapter 14 . 2/20/2013
Epicness! Kiba and Haku escaped, Sasuke revealed himself, Naruto finally has the modivation to get stronger, and Kenima's just joining in to protect like usual. One thing, Naruto has to be the one to defeat Sasuke. Has to.
alice lockheart chapter 14 . 2/6/2013
this is a story i personaly think should be published its so much like a book that i aspect there to be a copyright date
Dragunav chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Too bad, kinda wanted to see Kiba, Hinata, Neji, Tenten and Shino too. Teachers wouldn't be so hard to add but i guess that it would've been far too many characters.
CB chapter 14 . 1/25/2013
well, after reading this much i now have a view of the bigger picture. you see there is a problem, you are trying to hard with the konoha and other things. you are having a hard time meshing the two universes in the rulings of the kenichi universe. if you want to see how to properly have the same undertones as the naruto universe and the kenichi universe i would suggest kenchi617 i beleive he is. the author of better left unsaid and other naruto fanfiction. this team hebi arc is utterly pointless. its just a bunch of senseless fighting to introduce the konoha characters. please do more research in the styles before you use them in this series. each style is terribly complex. it is a big undertaking to do the manga or everything else iin the kenichi world right. it simply is the nature of it. like the current manga, the grappling man? he needs to go jump off a cliff. anyone with a shred of true martial arts experience can tell that. if you really want this story to be great. focus on naruto. not sakura not butt humper sasugay not everybody else. naruto. and a hung gar practioner taking on a sumo wrestler?
Darpsonic6 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
i like the story when are there going to be more chapters
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