Reviews for Unclean
XeroX chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
sspose a genestealer cult? has captured her! Well if my assumption is right than it is a very good discription of how it works. Her despair and wish to fight with her her final demise against the overpowerfull hive mind and its servants is very striking.

I cant help but hope she will find a way to fight back against the enemy against all odds.

Well anyway, however you decide to go on with this story; I liked this chapter, it was very emotional and I hope you will continue it or if you dont want to, write another w40k fic.

mfg XeroX