|Reviews for Do Not Cross|
| Claire chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
So, where is this novella you mentioned. It's been almost 2 years, and seriously still no expansion on the story.
| MatingInspires chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
You didn't expand it?
| ivanhoeslady chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
who's the author?
| Annichka chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Awesome story! How do I find out the author's name? I want to read the rest :)
| Molly May Pinky chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Hey just read your story & its got me hooked.
Please tell me you made it into a longer story.
I want to know who the killer was.
Let me know the name plllllleeeeeasssseee
| Agonidzo777 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Very good, please finish it.
| Lily Adrienne chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
I can't wait for this O/S to be expanded!
| luvstobedazzled chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
This is really good! I'd love to read more of it if you ever decide to continue/update it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Wow great story! I love it...can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing!
| Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
More more more more. Please. I want more of this story, the plot is not one that I've read before and I loved it. ( not sure if it's cause I like those crime shows or my silly mind. )
| Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Good story :)
| ArekWhitlock chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I totally love this story!
plz write more:))
| LiLi82 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
| Ruffluv chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Honestly, I didn't think I fancied the detective thing in the summary,but this story is an advert for not judging a book by it's cover! It had me gripped while in bed next to my sleeping boyfriend last night lol I liked the little touch of the police tape seperating parts of the story. Well done on your placing in the competition-v deserved!x