|Reviews for Tripping and Falling|
| Saber chapter 1 . 8/1
I thought the idea was absolutely brilliant! I quite enjoyed their fight as it was actually really telistic (at least from my expirience). Aside from the need for further elaboration at the end I see no fault in your story. Editing is a big part of and author's life and you shouldn't be ashamed if your story isn't as perfect as you feel it should be, besides like I said (or rather typed) I saw no fault! Just a little more elaboration and your your story would be fit to be called a masterpiece!
| Moonlight-MidnightYaoi chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
There should be a second chapter :D ill so read it!
| InSanIty-of-REALITY chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Don't be hating on yourself! This was sooo cute! I can imagine that happening to them in the guild or something :D
ugh they need to be together so much it hurts!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Y'know you could've just written a draft on Word or something and then posted a final better version when you had more time...sigh...
But honestly, it wasn't TOO bad...
| ofgreennekomimis chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
its adorable!33 me want more!DD: kya
love that they fight just to cover up, I wonder what'll they do if someone found out..D: *loud inhale* blackmail?:D?
tho, I'd just wish it says "rose pink" instead of "salmon" haha, cause my head was full with images of salmon laying eggs. lololXDDD (recently watched documentary) and rose kinda makes it.. umm.. ...rosy?D: lol
| StarGirlXxx chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
This is a good story honestly it is, but for the love of god PLEASE,PLEASE put romance in the genre seriously it says friendship! Friendship, seriously y u no select proper genre?
Sorry rant over... Good story it's honestly not as bad as you make out, and compared to some of the other rubbish on here. So yeah, good job.
| CsillaDream chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Kris, you lied!
That was utterly adorable! I wish I could see what sort of 'punishment' Natsu is getting for almost blowing their cover? XD
I don't know why but I see them as middle-schoolers in this fic XD
Natsu and his soft cheeks *poke poke*
Gray: No more cookies for you *glares*
| Nayeli chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I really like this, I had a nice time reading it, their are so lovely when they fight :3
just change "Do you mind? I'm trying to see the bored" for board and everything is good :3
| AnjoRemix chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
omg that was soo cute! and damn yup it's a nice cover up guys we all know about it right! XD awww 3 it was short but still lovely 3
| O.o.O.Flame Belt.O.o.O chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
I gotta admit, its a simple concept, but u actually made it really interesting. I like the story and the idea really
I liked it specially when the idiots tripped due to the wrong choice of the place of the fight and natsu's blushing face at the End
take care of ur golden fingers
| BakaUsagi chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
:O Awesome so far please update soon :)