Reviews for Cruel Fates of Destiny
Alexandria Jaganshi chapter 4 . 4/25/2007
O.o I like the story so far... but I'm a bit confused...

~AJ~
hollybird chapter 4 . 2/3/2004
OH :bounces:: I like i like keep writing. PLEASE !
Ja ne,
Hollybird
Alex360 chapter 4 . 4/23/2003
That's fab! You really need to continue! Please hurry!

Alex360 _!

P.S. Chapter 22 is up now of The Girl On Gaea! Please RR!
EboniChadeau chapter 4 . 12/24/2002
Are you going to finish this? It seems to be abandoned. Don't let me be right. I'd like to find out what happens next, because you write so well.
ChibiMinko chapter 4 . 11/10/2002
Ack! You LOVE cliffies, dun you! _ I like this story. A bit unclear but good, nun the less. Continue and take a look at my stories sometime. _~ I'll be waiting for more...

Cakes and Carrots,

Minko
Alex360 chapter 4 . 10/27/2002
That was fab! PLEASE CONTINUE! Hurry wiv da updates!

P.S. Chapter 16 and 17 of The Girl On Gaea by me are up now, just incase you wanted to know! Please RR!
FuyuSarah chapter 6 . 8/23/2002
WAI!

I SO like your fic! Now everybody's at the edge of their seats, waiting to see who Damien is! How an there be two Vans?

Just make sure the real Van ends up with Hitomi, OK? *throws ee daggers* Hehe...

Well, it depends on you, actually. Do you think Cruel Fates will do better? I think what's good to do is post your new fic, (without erasing the old one, of course) and THEN ask which one the readers like better.

I think that if the storyline's basically the same, the second one most usually works better, from my experience...

Oh well, hope that helps!
Ivy chapter 1 . 8/21/2002
I really gotta say that this was purdy good...ur really talented, and like i said i like all the romantic parts...i got a thing for that. I don't know if this how u write a review (cause its my first time) but it's my opinion and I liked it. keep on writing...
Ivy chapter 1 . 8/21/2002
I really gotta say that this was purdy good...ur really talented, and like i said i like all the romantic parts...i got a thing for that. I don't know if this how u write a review (cause its my first time) but it's my opinion and I liked it. keep on writing...
EboniChadeau chapter 6 . 8/21/2002
Not to sound mean or anything, but I think you should do what you want. It's your story!
EboniChadeau chapter 5 . 8/21/2002
Hey, I love your fic! You read mine, so I wanted to be nice and read yours. Keep it up!

I can't wait for you to post your next chapter.

Hey, Would it be in your interest to read some of my other stories? Pretty please!
Furor Scribiendi chapter 6 . 8/10/2002
Ossu! Soiee...I'm so used to using Japanese words *and pissing off all my friends in the process me teaching myself via online lessons*; that means hello; . But if you knew that I didn't want to sound patronizing and all. Aie ya...my foot is heading for my mouth ryte now, so me is going to get to the point. If you really think that it needs the re-write then I say go for it. I'll tell ya something; that Escaflowne fic of mine, it's a complete rewrite; I have three notebooks written in my craptacular handwriting that only me and my best friend can read. Three 160-page notebooks that I ended up slicing into bits and re-organizing. And the end result is much better than the incessant repetitive prattle I had before. rewritescan be great if you know how to use the oen and you do. If you add in the other characters, which is a good idea if you ask me *hint hint cough cough*, what you could do is make their stories all weave together...like how threads make cloth and all. Kamisama that was a horrible analogy...*shakes head*, but you get the idea and all.

*sniffles* Disc Two is broken? Injustice I say! *sounding strangely Wufeish * That's like the best one next to the disc four...and the FFX...I borrowed it offa my friend...not that he had much choice in the matter. So yeah; that's my plan until I get my own PS2 *damn the summer lag...no paycheque yet!*; steal his from time to time...Lol...man I crack myself up sometimes...how sad is that? Skool in two weeks...heh..sounds like us up here in Canada *shudders at the thought of OAC in September* stick it out man...Eddings will help...very absorbing and funny books they are...I'm finishing up the Tamuli after a month...I'm laughing too much at Ulath and Kalten...when you read it you'll understand the whole cooking scheme...*snickers* soiee...I ate half a tub of ice cream as I was typing this and the sugar is kicking in right now...and hey, don't feel bad about your 3-page essay on why you love potatoes; I wrote a whole story for my independant study unit in history..appendix with pictures and translations, footnotes and whatnot...all in a 10$ notebook and I only used like thrity pages. And my cat is running around like she's on the nip... O.o go figure eh?

Now who writes long messages from a simple one?

Furor Scribiendi
R.D chapter 6 . 8/5/2002
i think you should rewrite the fic and make it better! but just dont change it too much.
D'vineBeauty chapter 6 . 8/5/2002
Rewrite it. From what I've read You're a great writer and dedicated. Also your keeping the basic story and love triangle so its okay plus, with your rewrites and newly found inspiration,and fixing up mistakes the edited version should be great.
0 chapter 6 . 8/5/2002
please continue! u've got a really original plot going and it's really interesting! so please continue!
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