Fantastic story

Only last chapter you finish to soon but fantastic story

Fantastic story

This is a wonderful story!

A fab fic! Love the cosy, intimate atmosphere between the Captain and Maria below deck when he says goodnight to his children; him teasing her and stroking her back while making sure the Eberfelds aren't watching is so dangerously flirty and you can almost feel the sparks flying. And the scene you write where the Captain drags Maria away from Werner in a petulant strop because she has ignored him all day is just genius! Hope you post some new stories someday, you're a som ledge :)

Love it! Thank you for writing such a remarkable story!

I. ADORED. THIS. FULL STOP

I debated about leaving a review as you had posted this story so long ago - but I just had to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it. This is the first piece of yours I’ve read, but already I can’t wait to read the others! Your writing is so vibrant and snappy - you really have a gift of making even the simplest of scenes come alive. I too, love exploring this phase of their relationship between Edelweiss and Ball, and that it was against the backdrop of a jaunt in the Mediterranean was just perfect. Your version of intoxicated-slightly-dark-but-vulnerable Georg is sublime - full of passion and tension but still so real. And love your understated humour peppering the entire story. Thank you for sharing this piece!

What a great story.

I have read this story twice and have just gotten around to reviewing. It is so well written and I absolutely love the idea of Maria having the chance to see the Captain in his element on board a ship. I especially loved the detail of Georg feeling suffocated during the parties and seeking solace in the sea and fresh air on deck. Not to mention that I love the hint of jealousy we get to see from the Captain regarding Maria, and his flicker of self-doubt when she doesn't swoon over him like he hoped she would. All in all one of my favorite fics that I just keep coming back to. Thank you for your work!

I’m LOVING this story

This was great I LOVED Max in this in the movie he is one of my favorite characters and because of this he is higher on the list of favorites! Btw loved the motorcycle !
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Wonderful.
Love Georg jumping on the motorcycle when they came ashore, to have so freedom, and wondering whether anyone actually knew anything about anything. Very profound indeed.
And them on the lake together back in a different boat, signifying, as you said, how much as changed as well as what is still the same.
Georg admitting that there were some parts of the trip to the Riviera that he greatly enjoyed, while others he found confusing was great, and I'm glad he finally told her the truth about what happened that night.
The line about the fact that he would've doubted even the Pope's intentions was awesome, and the ending about getting intimate in the rowboat and being uncomfortable was cheekily awesome.

Oh my
Great to see Maria trying to keep herself calm as she sorted through her feelings. Love the idea that she wanted to apologise to the Captain for something, but she didn't know what that something was.
Also really liked how we didn't see Georg's perspective until after Maria noticed him arrive.
His thoughts about what she'd told him, his relief that he could remember it, and his curiousity at whether he would care if the situation had been with Elsa was great.

Lovely.
Georg waking up to find Maria in his bed was brilliant; but I do like how it was in fact completely innocent and nothing happened.
Then seeing Georg rushing around like a madman after hearing the knock on the door was great - and him kissing Elsa to avoid her noticing Maria's shoes was hysterical.
Maria's comments when she awoke about him being always interesting to talk to, her apologies for not leaving, and of course the sofa were so perfect for her.

Gorgeous.
Maria trying to distance herself after everything that's happened only for Georg to suspect something and ask her. Her answer, and the fact that they both knew it wasn't true was just what was needed - and the 'Damn you' gave me a very My Fair Lady vibe.
Him dragging her off later on was also great - or at least what happened after they stopped was great. The way Maria was subconsciously reminded of her uncle thought she knew the Captain was very different, and the way she ended up telling him and he comforted her was wonderful.
The way she stepped in and said 'You remind me that I'm safe now' when he was struggling to finish the sentence was truly beautiful.