|Reviews for The Hound and the Bird|
| Dat Gurl chapter 25 . 8/26
I need more chapters to read. These were great. I literally couldn't stop reading. Now...emptiness because it seems there's no more to read. :(
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/17
I like when you keep the vocabulary appropriate to the time period. You had some good sentences here, like: "Fuck the Seven Hells" (in another chapter you had said "to hell with them" or something like that, which sounded too contemporary.) "Should she have died..." sounded appropriate, too.
I don't even like to say any thing negative- it's so wonderful you are writing this. My only recommendation would be to try to avoid contemporary language usage. Even just switching two words around can help. For example, you could say, "She wants it not...", instead of "she doesn't want".
Keep up the good work! And thank you again!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/17
Thank you for writing this! I am really enjoying it
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/3
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| Chelsea chapter 25 . 3/14
Please update! I really miss this story. Xxx
| JenesisX chapter 1 . 3/3
I tried to get into this, I really wanted to. But there are a few things bothering me... I'd say I'm up to maybe chapter 8 now, but not sure if I can keep going. For one thing, Sandor and Sansa both seem a bit OOC, and they realize their feelings for each other in what seems like a totally random and sudden moment. The involvement of the others in this "secret" felt odd to me, too... I don't know. Your writing skills are definitely good, though there are some errors a good proofreading or a BETA could correct. I hope you don't take this as meanness, because it isn't. I just wanted to give an honest opinion instead of silently walking away without saying anything.
| CloneGirl 897 chapter 25 . 12/23/2014
Finish the story, pretty please? :(
| Yngvildr the Voracious chapter 25 . 12/20/2014
What will happen when Tywin will scold Tyrionfor not taking Sansa's maidenhead? Interesting AU... Looking forward to the rest. Also, lookup the wikipedia article for okay please.
| IsYourH3artTaken chapter 25 . 11/24/2014
I seriously love the way you write this. It's not mushy or overly exaggerated. Sandor sounds like Sandor and Sansa is Sansa. They still bicker and argue, which is always humorous to read. It's perfectly written and so in character. Ugh, I really wish this happened on the show. But having this story is enough. :D
Can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/20/2014
I don't like the weirdness of this chapter. But I do like how Sansa seems to be reacting to it. I mean, knowing Joffrey he'd do something creepy like that. I just don't like it lol.
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
I like that you've taken the time to develop their relationship. A little waiting never hurt anybody.
| Twilightluver1966 chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
This was a nice start but the partial sentences were VERY hard to read, in most cases a simple comma would have improved the flow of the sentences tremendously. Don't get me wrong, it is a very good story just some of the sentence structure was irksome to read for a severly anal person such as myself. ;0)
| Heidilynn08 chapter 25 . 10/6/2014
I love this story!
I cant wait for another update!
One thing I've noticed is that Sansa is doing a whole bunch of sexual stuff to Clegane but he isn't reciprocating in the same fashion? I know she would feel awkward and all that but it isn't as though he would be taking her virginity? Why? Not fair at all.
Keep up the great work!
| Aimee.Lilith chapter 25 . 10/4/2014
Oh my goodness! This was amazing! Totally worth the wait, keep writing!
| magnus374 chapter 25 . 10/4/2014
Good, things are better between them now.