Reviews for Magykal Fate
fandomqueen51 chapter 13 . 5/11/2017
This a good story. I like the plot line but there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes which does make it a little difficult to read at times. And also the song you used in this chapter is A Lullaby for a Stormy Night. The singer is Vienna TengI believe.
Life is Loopy chapter 10 . 9/6/2015
Great story but this is horrible English.
Anrheithwyr chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
You've got a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes that makes it hard to read. I'd recommend the use of a beta who can help to improve your chapters.
lilac-kat chapter 19 . 6/7/2013
Good story! I like that Marcia still has a living family member. One thing I noticed, in Chapter 2 I think, you accidentally referred to "Laurine" by her real name, Odale. Whether that was intentional or not, idk, but if not you might want to get that fixed, so as not to give away the secret too soon. Other than that, I loved this!
Riain Tennesne chapter 4 . 5/12/2013
A good chapter, overall.
Riain Tennesne chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
Heh, nice Darke Magyk there, Laurine. Although, this chapter was short.
Riain Tennesne chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Again, grammar, but other than that it was pretty good... I don't know that "Septimus" would be crying though. And what about this Odale you mentioned?
Riain Tennesne chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Pretty interesting, though grammar mistakes need to be fixed.
Lyall Areyel chapter 19 . 2/14/2013
Yes, great ending although grammar errors appear and such.

Lyall Areyel chapter 18 . 2/14/2013
Ah, parallel to my own young army years, I believe. XD

This is good.

Lyall Areyel chapter 17 . 1/12/2013
I'm liking this story.

Lyall Areyel chapter 16 . 1/12/2013
Pain. Yes, pain...
So is this chapter called Pain or A Short Visit?

Lyall Areyel chapter 15 . 1/12/2013

Lyall Areyel chapter 14 . 1/12/2013
This traitor stuff happens. Trust me. I know.
Fairly good job with the chapter.

Lyall Areyel chapter 13 . 1/12/2013
I'm not in a good mood. Not to do with this at all, but something else. Something.
So all I can say, in a dull and pained voice, is "a little confusing, but good. Longer than the others. I wonder why Laurine had that specific nightmare."

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